Punctuations matter

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To introduce myself

My name is XIE YU XIN,I am 16 years old the day. I am a girl who lives in XU ZHOU, withfamily and me lives together. There are four people in my family.my father., mymother, mybrother and me. My mother and me relationship is very good. I amfeltmy mother very lovely.becauseshe always has the ability to make me happy. I have a few happier, listening to music, play the computer games and watching the TV. In holiday, I am alwayswantedto the go out together with friends. NOW I have a very full day.

I want to travel toHaiNai.Wherethe sea is blue. The summer go there,can feel verycold. I will regret my whole life if I can not visit there in the future.

Beginning now, doeverything well, makea good impression onthe people around you.hope thatthe people around mein the future.Iwant people to praise me more than criticize me.

When others say it should be done, donot do what others say. To have their own ideas, todo their own.Livealone in the future anything decided by myself