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Oct.31 On Writing Well(Ch3&4)

Oct.31 On Writing Well(Ch3&4)

作者: 老鹰的小鸡 | 来源:发表于2017-10-31 22:51 被阅读0次

chapter2标题是simplicity,而第三章末尾写着simplify,第三章详细讲解了如何分辨clutter,让读者理解最终简化。


PART ONE SUMMARY

In Charpter 3 the author illustrates how to define clutter and quotes various example like George W. Bush‘s presidency .etc.In order to distinguish clutter, the author suggest put brackets around every component and go over each sentence.

第四章讲了在你写文章之前建构文章,风格形成最基本的条件是做你自己,虽然这很难做到,要有自信。风格与灵魂是联系在一起的,而写作就是深层心理的反应,好的作者能通过你的文笔感觉出来。


PART TWO VOCABULARY

PSYCHE:your deepest feelings and thoughts in your mind

e.g.to rebulid our pashche,we should take the passive mind away.

pumpous:表示浮夸,文中有个短语put on airs可以用来解释这个单词

faddish:风靡一时it will not remain for a long time

e.g. a faddish style of clothes


PART THREE  THOUGHTS

You can develop the same eye. Look for the clutter in your writing and prune it ruthlessly. Be grateful for everything you can throw away.Reexamine each sentence you put on paper.

There is no style store; style is organic to the person doing the writing, as much a part of him as his hair, or, if he is bald, his lack of it.

Good writers are visible just behind their words.

Style is tied to the psyche, and writing has deep psychological roots.The reasons why we express ourselves as we do, or fail to expressourselves because of “writer’s block,” are partly buried in the subconscious mind.

写文章前要架构文章而不是随意下笔,重新检查审视你所写的句子,精简的目的是为了让读者理解。风格也不是一日形成的,我们羡慕大文学家那是别人一砖一瓦兢兢业业地做成的,最重要的是做自己而不是随波逐流,不要害怕外界的目光要有自信,好的作家通过文笔让读者是可以感受得到的。风格中透露你的灵魂,文思枯竭的作家是无法写出文章的,写作同时也是一种自我意识的体现。

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