第一段
paragraph1
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所有的主语:Fitzgerald, the barely twenty-one-year-old Princeton dropout;
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主语的流动:一直都是Fitzgerald;
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总结:提出观点:Fitzgerald有很强的自律,然后讲述他在服兵役时的写作routine。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. He initially worked during evening study periods.(period具体事物)
2. he had mailed off the manuscript that would eventually become, with major revisions, This Side of Paradise.(revision几轮修改,具体事物)
第二段
paragraph2
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所有的主语:Fitzgerald, many of his nights, The real writing, This method, Stories, The three-jump story;
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主语的流动:从Fitzgerald,到many of his nights、The real writing、This method, 再到Stories,再回到Fitzgerald,再到The three-jump story;
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总结:讲述Fitzgerald退役之后的写作routine。
第三段
paragraph3
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所有的主语:Novels, Fitzgerald;
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主语的流动:从Novels,到Fitzgerald;
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总结:讲述Fitzgerald的关于酗酒的习惯,以及他对酒的态度和看法。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. But he went on regular binges and later admitted to his editor that alcohol had interfered with the novel.(binge具体事物)
2. It has become increasingly plain to me that the very excellent organization of a long book or the finest perceptions and judgment in time of revision do not go well with liquor.(perception具体事物)
大总结:
第一段提出观点:Fitzgerald非常自律,讲述他在服兵役时的写作routine;第二段讲述他在退役之后的写作routine;第三段讲述他酗酒的习惯,及他的看法。
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