I am Li Hua. My home is one kilometer from our school? I usually walk to school every day. It takes me about 15 minutes. My friends are Tom and Mary. Tom always goes to the library to read books by bus. It takes him about 20 minutes to get there. Mary’s home is two kilometers from our school. She likes riding a bike. She usually rides her bike to school. It takes her about 12 minutes to get our school. We are good friends.
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这次作文写得普遍不是很好，主要是上课听讲不够认真。首先第一段要写成这样：Jenny goes to the zoo with her parents every Saturday. 写这句话的时候要注意语序。然后是The zoo is big. There are many animals in the zoo. 在什么地方有什么东西，我们就用there be结构.到现在，还有同学搞不清楚. I have a good time.
第二段分别再写这三个人喜欢的和不喜欢的动物，以及原因。表种类的时候，我们一般是用复数。Jenny wants to see elephants because they are smart. But she doesn't want to see lions because they are scary.父母亲两栏仿照这个结构。
上课一定要认真听，不要课后从手机上乱搜。下午上课前将自己的文章重新修改或重写上传。
Jenny always goes to the zoo with her parents every Saturday. The zoo is very big. There are lots of animals in it. They have fun there.Jenny wants to see elephants, because she thinks they are very smart. But she doesn't like lions, because she thinks they are very scary. Her mother likes pandas, and she wants to see them, because she thinks pandas are very cute. But she doesn’t like koalas , because she thinks they are kind of lazy. Her father wants to see tigers, because he thinks they are very cool/interesting. He doesn't like giraffes because he thinks they are really boring.
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