My mum has magic. Why?Because my mum can do lots of things, she can ride a lion and fly in sky. That’s so cool. And she can dance with a butterfly or change into butterfly. I like it. It’s so beautiful.
My mum can cook delicious food for me, Yummy, yummy. It’s very delicious. I can eat three bowls of rice.
But I prefer the mum besides me. She is always thinking of me. In a word, everyone’s
mum is 都不一样,every one has only one mum.
So,I love my mum.
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网友评论
下次我鼓励孩子学着用思维导图写,这样估计只有他本人才能看得懂吧😂
文章的结构很好,即使中文版本也是有新意,完全脱离常规套路,展开了天马行空的想象,并进行对比,最终想象中的妈妈非常非常精彩,非常奇异好玩,但是仍然最爱身边的妈妈——多么美好的文章啊!
Thank you, Luna.
其实大家听不见她的朗读,英语发音才美呢,这是我们“Ellen写作班”的福气,有这么多出色的小作家,当场写作,现场分享,朗读,倾听。