原稿：
When the students are running around the playground, it suddenly snows. But it didn't snow heavily, so we didn't stop. There is ice on the playground, two students stand on it to avoid the others running on it. I felt great of running in the snow.
Correctly:
When the students are running around the playground, it suddenly snows. But it didn't snow heavily, so we didn't stop. There is ice on it, and two students stand on the ice to avoid the others running on it. I felt great about running in the snow.
（事实上：大课间跑操的时候下雪了，操场上还有个地方结冰，有俩热心值周生站在上面。）
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