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作者: 余政彥 | 来源:发表于2019-08-15 06:49 被阅读0次

reviewer 1 review

score 5/5

  Overall Rating

    Outstanding

  Comments on Overall Rating

    (1) The answers are good and the corresponding explanations are reasonable.

    (2) The team develop an integrated visual analytics tool to explore the data and

    perform reasoning. The tool supports interactive search, query, and filtering.

    Most impressive details are the saving functions and provided help tips

  All Challenges - Answers to Questions

    The answers are overall acceptable.

    All the data are incorporated, i.e., static and mobile sensor data.

    The uncertainty is calculated by the traditional IQ-based approaches. Other

    anomalies that usually occur in database (missing, negative, extremely large) are

    also considered

    The assessments are well explained, such as why most cars are free of

    contamination risk and why a car (No. 20) is worth keeping an eye on.

    The assessment of the difference between static and streaming data analysis is

    acceptable.

  Review Part 2 - Respond for Grand Challenge and All Mini-Challenges

    The team develop an integrated visual analytics tool to explore the data and

    perform reasoning. Multiple views (animated map, line charts, and uncertainty

    glyphs) are well combined. The tool supports interactive search, query, and

    filtering to help experts perform deep reasoning. Such reasoning process is better

    illustrated in the video than in the submission web page.

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reviewer 2 review

score 4/5

  Overall Rating

    Good

  Comments on Overall Rating

    This team built a reasonable custom dashboard for tackling this problem, and

    managed to get the big picture of what was going on. There are some missed

    opportunities to dig further into the data, but many of these were missed by the

    other submissions I have reviewed. The questions were generally well answered and

    supported by visualization and discussion, though question 4 and 5 strayed a bit.

  All Challenges - Answers to Questions

    In general, this submission did a reasonable job of answering the questions. The

    answers were generally well supported by visualization and an explanation of their

    thoughts. While not uncovering everything that was in the ground truth document,

    they do not deviate significantly from the answers I observed in other

    submissions. They spotted some of the spreading radiation and identified a number

    of anomalous readings from the sensors.

    The approach taken to uncertainty is generally well explained, though they do not

    take a holistic view and think about uncertainty of an area being based on lack of

    readings, instead they appear to think about the reliability of the readings taken

    in a particular area. This leads to a somewhat distorted view where regions with

    few readings are deemed _less_ uncertain because the lack of readings brings the

    variance down.

    Holistic thinking would also have been helpful when considering the behavior of

    the sensors themselves. Since they focused on outliers or anomalies, they failed

    to capture more systemic problems with the sensors, nor did they take the

    opportunity to calibrate them against other sensors (another common feature across

    the submissions I've reviewed). As such, they missed many of the ground truth

    sensor issues.

    The place where this submission is the furthest off is in response to the

    question of how many contaminated cars there are. They list 11, and proceed to

    list off sensors that have high readings. This seems to be a confusion about

    whether or not the contaminated cars have sensors (again, a common mistake).

    Unfortunately, many of the cars they list are sensors that are supposed to be

    suspect.

    For part four, we don't really get a report on the state of the city, we get an

    explanation of the workflow with their tool.

    For question 5, I think the authors didn't fully understand the difference between

    streaming and static analysis. The claim appears to be that in a stream scenario,

    there is no access to historical data, which they feel is very important. I'm not

    sure why there would be no memory to the system -- just no peeking at the future.

  Review Part 2 - Respond for Grand Challenge and All Mini-Challenges

    This team appears to have written a custom visual analytics tool which certainly

    was the primary analytic tool. They designed a dashboard that seems to have given

    them good access to the data. I was thrilled to see that the tool actually

    included a mechanism for annotation, so observations could be recorded and

    returned to. I wish that they could have taken this a little bit further, however,

    and allowed the sensor readings to be edited. I think removing a couple of

    outliers would have improved some of their visualizations.

    There were two choices that I found unfortunate from a visualization perspective.

    First, for the heatmaps of radiation levels, the scale seems to be set dynamically

    based on the current data subset. This makes it nearly impossible to compare

    different times. Also, by the outliers seem to have seriously skewed the

    visualizations, obscuring the general rise in readings.

    I am also not convinced by the pale borders for indicating the level of

    uncertainty. I think that makes the graphs harder to read, making it difficult to

    really see the regions where there are problems. I think they would have done

    better to make another chart, rather than trying to squeeze another variable into

    the existing one.

    Overall, I think the team produced a reasonable dashboard. There were some missed

    opportunities (some more processing on the data, and more flexibility in looking

    at the position of sensors over time stand out), but the big picture seems to have

    been acquired.

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reviewer 3 review

score 3/5

  Overall Rating

    Average

  Comments on Overall Rating

    + clear and understandable submission

    + questions are mostly answered

    + good use of multiple visualizations that focuse on different aspects of the data

    - VA tool is not innovative

    - interactions in the approach are questionable (reselection of timestamps in each

    individual view)

  All Challenges - Answers to Questions

    Strength:

    + Most datatypes are used: timpestamp, latitude, longitude, sensor ID, value

    + Long/Lat is used for individual sensors and for sensors per region

    + good representation of uncertainty and explanation where uncertainty comes from

    + assumptions are well documented, reasonable, and comprihensible

    + questions where to deploy more sensors was very well explained (comprehensive

    and detailed)

    Neutral:

    o discussion of streaming versus static data was ok

    o using the fine grained grid is ok, but using roads to map data might have given

    even better information. for specific cases a coarser grid based on the districts

    would have been good as well to aggregate data.

    Weakness:

    - uncertainty visualization is simplistic and not innovative

    - detection of patterns and anomalous behaviors of sensors

    - mobile sensors with high radiation are not correlated to stationary sensors to

    check if the mobile is contaminated and to calibrate the mobile sensor

    - wrong conclusion about mobile sensors, e.g., constant values of mobile sensors

    might be because these cars are contaminated

    - cause and effect misinterpreted: mobile sensors are not moving because radiation

    decreases, the measured radiation changes because the car is moving

    - just the two main events are detected (earthquake and aftershock), not other

    real patterns are detected

  Review Part 2 - Respond for Grand Challenge and All Mini-Challenges

    the submission and answers are clear, the questions are answered, and the answers

    are supported by visusalizations

    Visual analytics tool:

    - tool is not really innovative but serves the purpose of the data

    - map of data grid is helpful

    - design of interactions is questionable, e.g., timestamp has to be selected in

    each view separately

    - color ramp is from blue to red over green (red-green is generally a bad choice)

    - the max value of each map is different and changes for different timestamps

    - 5 different views showing different aspects of the data, but not really well

    interconnected

    - the menu that is hidden on the left is strange, why not integrate this into the

    approach, there is enough space and the data represented in this view might be

    relevant for other views

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reviewer 4 review

score 3/5

  Overall Rating

    Average

  Comments on Overall Rating

    This submission does a good job of providing an interactive platform for examining

    the data and the capability to share results. They provide clear illustrations by

    placing data on shape files and allowing users to step through time slices to view

    changes in the data. Recognizing limitations in a browser’s ability to display

    every data point at the same time, they provide at-a-glance detection of possible

    anomalies – helping the user hone in to “interesting” data areas. There was a good

    discussion of static vs mobile sensors as well as acknowledgement of the

    differences between static vs streaming data analysis.

    The visualization techniques are not particularly novel though the designed

    dashboard is new. Several of the visualizations are misleading in their depictions

    by displaying the color blue (for 0 radiation) in areas where there are clearly

    higher levels of radiation. In these cases, the author’s conclusions are not

    reflected in the visualization (and this disconnect is not addressed). It would

    have been nice to see deeper trending analysis organized by sensor readings,

    instead of a single scatterplot depicting all sensor readings – the outliers in

    the data set forced the visualization to hide unusual shifts in the data by

    squishing “normally” functioning sensor readings on top of each other at the

    bottom. As a result, things such as: infected vehicles, malfunctioning sensors,

    and contamination spread were much more difficult to identify and wrong

    conclusions were reached.

  All Challenges - Answers to Questions

    This submission is clear in its depiction of analytic results to the questions

    asked along with supporting documentation. They did a good job of stating

    assumptions and definitions up front and remained consistent throughout the

    analysis. While the visualization techniques are not new, they are applied

    effectively to answer questions. For the most part, the visualizations correctly

    supported the analytic conclusions drawn. In some cases, however, the

    visualizations are misleading in terms of depicting radiation levels over time and

    areas of contamination. Because of this, some of the conclusions drawn were not

    correct and affected rationale for questions which built on each other.

    A short discussion was provided regarding static vs streaming data analysis in

    which main differences were mentioned

  Review Part 2 - Respond for Grand Challenge and All Mini-Challenges

    This was a good use of visual analytic techniques to model the data set with the

    resulting dashboard tool being an effective medium for exploration. The

    interactivity of the tool enables good story-telling for data analysis and

    comprehension. All of the data appears to have been explored, however they noted

    that browser limitations would keep the entire set from being cohesively

    visualized. It was clear that they used the visualization tool to answer the

    questions and were able to provide snapshots of supporting visualized evidence.

    Many of the analytical conclusions reached were off-base, which I suspect is due

    to a lack of deeper trend analysis which might have revealed sensor-shift

    characteristics (to include subtle ones – such as on/off ramping, or more vibrant

    ones – such as right after the earthquake) which were not identified.

    Overall, the demonstrated tool could be an effective medium for big data analysis

    – offering multiple views of the data and interactivity for exploration.

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