Young Generation Lacking of Striving Spirit

  1、社会上不少人认为，现在的青年学生拼搏精神不够；

  2、对此你的看法是…

题目要求

题型分析，这个也是关于《元芳，你的看法是》的题目。但较于我们前面写的

  1、目前，在社会上有这样的一种说法，
文凭越高越吃香；  2、而有人些人则认为文凭不等于知识；  3、你的观点

中的1,2点并没有给我们写出来，那么这应该是我们自己分析。直接跳到第三步，你认同还是不认同这种看法，然后主体部分是你认同或不认同的看法。

让我们看看吧

范文

Young Generation Lacking of Striving Spirit

  It is now said that the young generation lack striving spirit. As I see it, this phenomenon is truly footed in fact. They are easy to give up and always turn a pessimistic attitude towards failure. But why does it happen?

  First of all, I have a sense that it is the living condition that matters. Born in the 1980s, most of us are the only child in the family, we receive endless care like flowers planted in greenhouses. It is the love from our parents that set us away from the real world. As this goes on, when we step into the society one day, we cannot get accustomed to the fierce and competitive social life.

  What´s more, with a negative attitude, many young people are easy to be tired with everything. When coming across with a sticky problem, they are willing to stay behind rather than have a crack. Perhaps the so-called sloth has claimed them for its own.

  The last but not the least, nowadays, the competition in the society is fiercer than we could imagine. In order to survive, the young people have to struggle under burden of study and work. Be adapted to the press and failure, the young people lose their self-confidence and self-esteem little by little, not to mention the striving spirit.

首先，让我们看开头如何写

这里我们的的观点明确是赞成为好写一点，

  It is now said that the young generation lack striving spirit. As I see it,

这个句式是否是我们常用的？因为已经有人这么认为了，那么我们不妨再把这种认为再重复啰嗦一下

 With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma. It is believed that high diploma equals to high ability and profound knowledge. 

我们在前面的学历和知识的对比中也用了这个开头。所有这是个万能开头

 They are easy to give up and always turn a pessimistic attitude towards failure. But why does it happen?

后面的这个 They are easy to give up and always turn a pessimistic attitude towards failure存粹是为了我们的as i see it加上去的。接得but why does it happen是想的步骤，如发生了这种现象，为什么会发生这种现象，发生这种现象后如何做。写作文总得有内容。这里我们的题目是你的看法，那么我们开头表述看法，结尾或中间给出解决方案。解决方案我们又难想，只能将就憋出一点为什么了

然后中间

这个没有采用总分结构，而是总分总

first of all,what's more,the last but not the least.基本的逻辑结构

其实中间的解释原因我也难想。下面我们看看ai 的回答

 1. **家庭环境：** 过度的保护和溺爱，以及家庭稳定可能会减少年轻人面对挑战的机会，从而减弱他们的拼搏精神。

2. **教育压力：** 高考竞争激烈，学业压力大，这可能使一些学生更关注成绩而不是个人成长

3. **社会压力：** 现代社会竞争激烈，就业市场不确定，这可能导致一些年轻人缺乏信心，因为他们担心未来。

4. **数字时代的影响：** 社交媒体和互联网的普及使得年轻人更容易受到虚假的成功故事和生活幸福的观念影响，导致他们对自己的进步产生不切实际的期望。 5. **社会期望：** 一些社会对年轻人有极高的期望，这种压力可能令他们不愿冒险尝试新事物或面对挑战。

6. **心理健康问题：** 心理健康问题如焦虑和抑郁可能导致年轻人失去拼搏精神。

我们能够想到的就是2,3条，看看范文怎么写的

  First of all, I have a sense that it is the living condition that matters. Born in the 1980s, most of us are the only child in the family, we receive endless care like flowers planted in greenhouses. It is the love from our parents that set us away from the real world. As this goes on, when we step into the society one day, we cannot get accustomed to the fierce and competitive social life.

i have a sense that it is

 可以翻译成 "我有一种感觉，它是" 或者 "我觉得它是"，具体的翻译取决于句子的上下文。

What´s more, with a negative attitude, many young people are easy to be tired with everything. When coming across with a sticky problem, they are willing to stay behind rather than have a crack. Perhaps the so-called sloth has claimed them for its own.

 they are willing to stay behind rather than have a crack. 

这句话的意思是，他们更愿意保持不变，而不愿尝试新事物。你可以翻译成："他们愿意守旧，而不愿尝试新的机会。"

The last but not the least, nowadays, the competition in the society is fiercer than we could imagine. In order to survive, the young people have to struggle under burden of study and work. Be adapted to the press and failure, the young people lose their self-confidence and self-esteem little by little, not to mention the striving spirit.

看起来主体部分还是难写

收获

寻到一个同类型的写作

学到万能句式和first what last 

学到分析这类题目找自己能写的发挥

让我们看看讯飞ai(这个是我们学习不来的，但他为我们提供了思路。可以去否认看法，用on one hand on the other hand ,in conclusion的结构

In my opinion, the lack of striving spirit among young people is a complex issue that cannot be attributed to any particular factor. It is a multifaceted problem that requires a holistic approach to address.

On one hand, the current education system and societal expectations may contribute to a sense of complacency among young people. With high academic pressure and a focus on rote learning, students may feel that success is measured solely by grades and test scores, rather than personal growth and development.

Additionally, the lure of easy money and instant gratification in the digital age may lead some young people to prioritize short-term pleasures over long-term goals and hard work.

On the other hand, the rise of social media and the constant comparison culture it fosters can also take a toll on young people's sense of purpose and motivation. Seeing their peers achieve seemingly unattainable levels of success or happiness can lead to feelings of inadequacy and a lack of confidence in one's own abilities. However, it is important to note that not all young people lack a strong sense of striving spirit. Many individuals are driven by personal passions and ambitions, and are willing to put in the hard work and dedication required to achieve their goals. It is also worth noting that the lack of striving spirit is not unique to any particular age group or cultural background.

In conclusion, while there may be various factors contributing to the lack of striving spirit among young people, it is crucial for society to create an environment that encourages personal growth, self-reflection, and resilience. By fostering a culture that values effort, determination, and perseverance, we can help young people develop the skills and mindset needed to succeed in today's rapidly changing world.