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I would like to go to Orange School. There are mainly three reasons why I would like to go there for my future study and life.

First, Orange School is a private school which is well-known in our city. I think it can develop the ability of living independently. Second, the teachers there are very young and active. I think they will understand us students better. Last but not least, there are colorful activities in Orange School. It will enrich my school life and help develop lots of skills. I  believe I will have a good time in Orange School.