Once upon a time, there was two horrid boys called Oscar and Birtie. They were so horrid, Mrs Shew put them in detention for a week.
Mrs Shew was a very nice teacher to them, but they were so horrid to her.
But when ever they were horrid, Mrs Shew was just so nice to the horrid boys.
But one day Mrs Shew has to go to the principles office and got in so much trouble by the horrid boys, she got fired.
7 days later after she left the school, the children were at home, even the horrid boys were at home. Children were watching TV and Mrs Shew said:" Those horrid boys."
The horrid boys called the meeting of the purplehand gang call Felix, Oillie, Noah, Oscar and Bertie.
Bertie said:" Let's save the teacher.Why would we?Because, because I like her."
"But how?" said Ollie.
"We go the the singing competition."
"But you out of the singing competition."
"Well, Oscar can lead you."
3 hours later, were here!
Yep, there's a long line. 2 mins later, Let's wait in this room. I think this is going to be a long time.
Actually it's time to go on stage.
"Oh okay, I want be a rock-star don't need to go to school, I want to be a rock-star Oh how it feels. so coooooooool!"
Woo Woo Wow all-some amazing, wow you win.
I won yes! yes! yes!yes! Great we can be famous and we can give it to Mrs Shew.
"Hi Mrs Shew."
" Why do you have a trophy?" said Mrs Shew.
Maisie and Kara said :" that's the same thing we were just going to ask. Ok. we will tell you we want to save the teacher. Here's the trophy, Yah. I can give it to the principle office, you may have your job back."
这是吾儿奥斯卡的处女作，因为太兴奋，他早上四点半就起来开始又写又画，这更文的劲头绝对完胜作为老母亲的我。虽然有的地方文笔不通，有的地方拼写错误，但是作为一位母亲，我还是很欣慰我的孩子，虽然年纪不大才六岁，但是至少是能完整的创作一个故事了。也不枉我胎教的时候写了那么多不疼不痒，不算不甜的故事。
我不求日后卡锅能成什么大作家，我只希望他能够开心的去书写他喜欢的故事。
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