句子翻译对比

1. It is tempting to believe that the security problem can be solved with yet more technical wizardry and a call for heightened vigilance.

人们很愿意相信更多的科技和更高的关注度可以解决安全问题。

通过利用更多尖端技术并提高警觉能解决安全问题---这一想法十分诱人。

拆分成两个句子表达更流畅

2. That requires a kind of cultivated paranoia which does not come naturally to non-tech firms.

这就需要一种近乎偏执的才华，显然非科技公司不具备这种资质。

这就需要一种刻意培养的偏执，但非技术型的公司并不会自然而然的具备这一特质。

cultivated paranoia没有理解

3. Such weaknesses are compounded by the history of the internet, in which security was an afterthought.

互联网历史上，安全问题永远都不是第一要务，这使得这种缺点雪上加霜。

互联网的历史使得这一弱点雪上加霜，一直以来，人们都是事后才会考虑安全性的问题。

与笃师翻译的顺序不同，但好像都行的通

4. Computer security is best served by encryption that is strong for everyone.

加密技术需要强大到服务于所有人才能保证计算机的安全。

为所有人提供强化加密是最有利于计算机安全的。

be served by 没有翻译出“有利于”的意思

5. A firm that takes reasonable steps to make things safe, but which is compromised nevertheless, will have recourse to an insurance payout that will stop it from going bankrupt.

一个按部就班采取安保措施的公司将会依赖保险支出来避免破产，只不过，或多或少的会做出妥协。

采取合理措施加强安全但仍然受到侵害的公司，可以向保险公司索赔以避免破产。

compromise理解偏差，insurance payment翻译腔严重，因为缺乏经济学领域的相关知识

6. But setting minimum standards still gets you only so far.

但是通过设定最低标准就只能做到这种程度了。

但是制定最低标准的作用也很局限。

get you only so far没有翻译出“作用有限”的意思

7. Silicon valley’s “go fast and break things” style of innovation is possible only if firms have relative free rein to put out new products while they still need perfecting.

硅谷的这种“快速发展，打破传统”的创新方式只有在公司能自由的推出新产品，同时不断完善自己的条件下才可行。

硅谷“快速行动勇于突破”的创新理念行得通的前提在于：公司有相对自由的权利推出尚未完善的产品。

while they still need perfecting理解偏差

词组翻译

Take security serious enough:足够重视安全问题

Take advantage of:占便宜；利用

Point of illicit entry:违法条款；非法侵入点

Create incentives for safer behavior:鼓励实施更安全的行为；创建鼓励安全行为的激励方案

Refrain from doing sth:避免；克制做...

Spark calls for:号召;激发对...的呼声

Hamper the ability of:降低……的能力；削弱...的能力

Oblige sb to do sth:要求某人做……；强制某人干某事

Disclaim liability for:推卸……的责任；豁免...的责任

Draw comparisons to:类似于……；与...对比

Lax attitude:态度懒散；松散的态度

Come down hard with:加强……；严厉惩罚

扩展积累

1. cultivate 培养

to work hard to develop a particular skill, attitude, or quality

Try to cultivate a more relaxed and positive attitude to life.

The company has been successful in cultivating a very professional image.

2. get you far 作用巨大

Clear and powerful writing is a rare skill in business, and it will get you far.

get you only so far 作用有限

But setting minimum standards will gets you only so far.

But  hard work will only get you so far, the rest is genetic, according to an expert.

（这句话让我想起：" Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration.")

4. put out= launch a new product 发布新产品

5. 重视

take sth seriously

The incentives to take computer security seriously are too weak.

pay attention to; attach importance to

心得总结

文章结构：我将文章分成三个部分：现状；可能的解决措施；规避风险的途径。现状下面包括几起严重的黑客侵入事件；猖獗的“黑市”；日趋严重的问题（从网络上的虚拟产品延伸到现实生活中的产品和活生生的人）；要想完全保证网络安全是不可能的。可能的解决措施有两个：更多的尖端技术和更高的警觉性。规避风险的途径有三：政府监管；法律问责制度和保险索赔；激励措施。

没有其他时间发感慨了，只想抓住满满的干货。继续努力。