头脑风暴
一、题目
Tourism is a multibillion dollar industry that supports economic development. Some people think that it causes damage to local environment and culture. What is your opinion?
二、解析
这是一篇旅游业大类观点型题目，要求考生讨论旅游做为一种产业的利弊。对于这个题目一开始我还有点担心没什么话说，谁知道等我在一张A4环保纸上画完一幅头脑风暴图，顿时感觉文思泉涌，甚至出现选择困难。这里有点矫枉过正有木有？哈哈。
那么既然素材不是问题，我就可以采用一种反衬的方式来讨论话题，凸显文稿的张力和丰盛，彰显自己的特色和品质。
三、正文
1、引言段
Summer and winter vacation are the time we are bombarded by the infinite envious yet pleasant and appealing images of sightseeing all over the world of our WeChat moment friends. WeChat is the Chinese version of social networking software like Whatsup or Twitter in the western countries. This bitter sweet online experience of us reveals how popular the tourist industry has become in our modern era. I believe this is a positive trend while there are rooms for the circumstances to further improve. （这一段我用微信朋友圈旅游照泛滥的现状不动声色地巧妙引出话题，避免了千篇一律的模版，并在段落末尾提出了自己的观点。）
2、主体#1段
Although tourism can help promote the exchange of culture between different places or nations and provide people with a getaway and leisure option, we cannot ignor the obvious drawbacks it poses to the local ecosystem and culture. Take just one example. Dali Scenic Resort of Yunnan Bai Ethenic Group in Yunnan Province in Southwest China is wellkown for its intoxicating Cangshan Mountain and Erhai Sea scenery nevertheless recently it has to close a large section of its tourist site to the visitors because the serious pollution of the water and air by the overflooding of tourists from the whole world. As a result it could no longer stand the pressure of excessive outside sightseeing demand.
What’s more, a plenty of historical sites or natural reserves are becoming more and more similar in both landscape and cultural flavor, even many of the souvenirs they offer are more or less the same. This kind of homogenization (同质化) issue is somewhat worrisome due to its undesirable impact on the indigenous culture. （这一段我用大理过度开发和旅游景点同质化的问题论述旅游业的弊端。）
3、主体#2段
Despite the existing problems tourism creates , the financial benefits it generates to the local community should not be underestimated. For instance, in many remote or backward regions of China, the local government has no other revenue but the cash income from the outside tourists. If the tourist industry is not well developed, a lot of folks will suffer from dire poverty and even lethal famine issue. On top of that, in some of the more developed economic motropolis like Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou or Shenzhen in mainland China, the booming tourist sector also contribute hugely to the publicity of the city culture and heritage as well as boosting and maintaining of the local economic momentum. （本段我笔锋一转大力宣讲旅游业的经济效益，回应话题的正方观点。）
4、尾声
To conclude, tourist industry brings us both advantages and disadvantages in the aspects of economy, environment and culture. On the one hand, we should properly channel its economic wealfare to better people’s life; on the other hand, we should figure out feasible and practical ways to regulate and control its side-effects such as ecosystem contamination and cultural erosion. （这里我回应开头、总结全文并提出应对当今旅游问题的对策。）
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