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1 Today is my grandpa's birthday. Happy birthday to him!
2 I was in a rush when I went out with my parents to celebrate my grandpa's birthday, and didn't wear enough clothes, so I felt a bit cold today.
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1 Today is my grandpa's birthday. Happy birthday to him!
2 I was in a rush when I went out with my parents to celebrate my grandpa's birthday and didn't wear enough clothes, so I felt a bit cold today.
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