话题：科技
【题目要求】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic：Internet and Privacy. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【写作指导】
para 1: introducing the importance of internet
para 2: presenting the disadvantage of internet and the influence on privacy in details.
para 3: giving some advices on preventing this phenomenon.
【优秀范文】
Internet, as a necessity in our modern era, exerts a profound impact on our life. Without Internet, there would be little thing can add spice to our day-to-day work and study.
However, while working for us, Internet is inevitably posing a serious challenge on the privacy of Internet users to some degree. It is universally acknowledged that those, who feel like visiting the website or using social software, registration with personal information is unavoidable. Specifically, on QQ, privacy settings are not as great as we expected. Anyone can see our private information including our name, address, gender, telephone number to name but a few. Even worse, on account of the feeble administration, our information might be stolen and misused by the criminals, threatening social security.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, proper measures must be taken before things get worse. Parents should educate young children with more alertness as surfing the Internet. And public campaigns and advertisements about Internet using will be the second suggestion. This will arouse the public attention and people’s awareness of the importance of protecting privacy.
【好词好句】
necessity 必需；必需品
exerts a profound impact on 产生巨大影响
day-to-day 日复一日
add spice to 为……增添风趣
registration登记,注册,挂号
on account of 由于，因为
feeble 虚弱的, 衰弱的, 无力的
alertness 警戒,机敏
arouse the public attention 引起公众注意
1. Without Internet, there would be little thing can add spice to our day-to-day work and study.
没有互联网，就没有什么可以为我们的日常工作和学习增添趣味了。
2. It is universally acknowledged that those, who feel like visiting the website or using social software, registration with personal information is unavoidable.
众所周知，想访问网站或使用社交软件，注册个人信息的人是不可避免的。
3. Even worse, on account of the feeble administration, our information might be stolen and misused by the criminals, threatening social security.
更糟糕的是，由于管理薄弱，我们的信息可能被犯罪分子窃取和滥用，威胁到社会安全。
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