话题：校园
【题目要求】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic：My View on Campus Violence. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【写作指导】
para 1: introducing the basic information of online education and present your own ideas.
para 2: explaining the reason why campus violence increases greatly
para 3: giving some advices on preventing this phenomenon.
【优秀范文】
At present, despite the positive changes in campus life, concerns have been raised over the issue of school violence. Personally, I suppose there are two reasons contributing to this phenomenon and each one needs to be dealt with in a particular way.
The first reason is that media violence, showing on the internet and TV, exerts a huge impact on students’ behaviors. That is because, most students, who lack self-delinquency tend to imitate their fantasy hero’s criminal behavior. Hence, along with the emergence of propensity for violence, some students abuse and even beat their classmates, which will lead to a series of school bullying. Another reason is that feeble family environment makes some teenage suffer from domestic violence. If someone experienced domestic violence, verbal abuse or assault by their parents from an early age, extreme personality would be the final result. In other words, when this kind of teenagers encounter something annoyed them in school, they can only resort to violent ways to solve the problem.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, proper measures must be taken before things get worse. The government should take harsher measures to restrict the rating of threatening and horror images on screen. And parents should adjust their way of educating their children, giving more care and attention to emotional needs.
【好词好句】
contribute to 致力于
phenomenon 现象
be dealt with 被解决
exert a huge impact on 对……产生巨大影响
delinquency 不法行为;少年罪犯
propensity 倾向；习性
bully 恐吓, 威逼
feeble 虚弱的, 衰弱的, 无力的
domestic violence 家庭暴力
assault 攻击，袭击
harsher measures 更严厉的措施
1. Hence, along with the emergence of propensity for violence, some students abuse and even beat their classmates, which will lead to a series of school bullying.
因此，随着暴力倾向的出现，一些学生侮辱甚至殴打他们的同学，这将导致一系列学校欺凌出现。
2. If someone experienced domestic violence, verbal abuse or assault by their parents from an early age, extreme personality would be the final result.
如果有人从小就经历过家庭暴力，辱骂或父母的攻击，那这种人最终可能会养成极端性格。
3. The government should take harsher measures to restrict the rating of threatening and horror images on screen.
政府应该采取更严厉的措施来限制屏幕上威胁和恐怖图像的评级。
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