今天聊聊自己正在尝试的一种英语写作方法，总共分成4步：
1、用自己的话写下一天的经过、心的；
2、用「写作批改网站」修改自己的作文；
3、用翻译软件翻译自己的作文，得到中文译文；
4、用翻译软件把中文译文翻译成英文，对比自己写的和机器翻译的不同。
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修正前：
Today is May 23rd, too hot!!
I felt so sad in the morning, but I did not know why. Originally I had an appointment with my new friend who lived on the 22nd floor. However, I felt tired and decided to cancel it. The guilt was filled my mind.
After I finished exercise, I was tired out and just wanted to sleep.
In the afternoon, I wanted to say no to my current life and decided to change it! Then I found a video about English learning methods to start my English road.
At 4.00pm, I went to Wal-Mart with parents and bought 532 yuan things. The items there were cheap, and they were cost-effective!
These are some tips:
1.Balance relax and work. Allocating your time reasonably.
2.Start to learn English. Finding methods on the Internet and just doing it!
3.Baby steps. You do not have to finish one thing immediately.
4.Writing diary in English. Writing, translating down, and trying to correcting them with tools.
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修正后：
Today is May 23, it's so hot!
I feel sad in the morning, but I don't know why. Initially, I made an appointment with a new friend who lives on the 22nd floor. However, I felt tired and decided to cancel it. This makes me feel guilty.
After the exercise, I was very tired and just wanted to sleep.
In the afternoon, I wanted to say no to my current life and decided to change it! Then, I found a video about English learning methods to start my English learning road.
At 4 pm, I went to Wal-Mart with my parents and bought something for 532 yuan. The things there are very cheap, and very cost-effective!
These are some tips:
1. Balance relaxation and work. Allocate your time wisely.
2. Start learning English. Find a way on the Internet and do it!
3. Baby step. You don’t have to finish one thing right away.
4. Write a diary in English. Write, translate and try to correct with tools.
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这个方法有点费时，整个流程下来基本要30min+，不过对自己的写作提升有一定的帮助哦～
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