话题：教育
【题目要求】
Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
I wish I could fly.
【写作指导】
本题考察的话题是当今学生面临的问题—课业过重。本题首先要描述图片中蕴含的社会现象，详细分析课业过重的原因以及对孩子的影响，最后对这种现象提出自己的建议。
【好词好句】
phenomena 现象
excessive pressure 压力过大
non-normalized 非规范化的
unreasonable curriculum 不合理的课程
comprehensive development 全面发展
appeal 呼吁，恳求；有吸引力，迎合爱好；诉诸，求助；上诉；（体育比赛中）诉诸裁判
overlook 忽视；原谅；俯视
severity 严格, 严厉, 苛刻
superabundant 过多的, 过剩的; 极多的
reverse the situation 扭转局面
1. That is to say, not only students but also teachers pay much more attention to the scores of tests that is regarded as students’ success.
也就是说，不仅学生而且教师也更加关注被视为学生成功的测试分数。
2. This is especially true that there is insufficient time to relax themselves, which means the increasingly tasks of class and homework have occupied all their time to study.
特别是没有足够的时间放松自己，这意味着课堂和家庭作业的日益增加的任务占用了他们所有的学习时间。
3. If people had not realized the severity of this problem, students would not have comprehensive development.
如果人们没有意识到这个问题的严重性，那么学生就不会有全面的发展。
【优秀范文】
As is revealed in the drawing, a boy, with heavy backpack which is full of books, is wondering that he struggles to free himself as the bird flying in the sky. Obviously, it is the excessive pressure of education that puts shackles on students.
From my point of view, there are two reasons for this phenomena. The first reason is that the fierce social competition leads to non-normalized educational model. That is to say, not only students but also teachers pay much more attention to the scores of tests that is regarded as students’ success. Another reason is that an unreasonable curriculum for students causes the great burden of study. This is especially true that there is insufficient time to relax themselves, which means the increasingly tasks of class and homework have occupied all their time to study. If people had not realized the severity of this problem, students would not have comprehensive development.
Given this situation, proper measures must be taken to reverse the situation. The society should appeal educators and students not to overlook the high scores. Additionally, the authority needs to enact relevant laws to reduce superabundant homework.
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