话题：教育
【题目要求】
Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
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【写作指导】
本题考察的话题是当今亲子间的重要问题—课外辅导班过重问题。本题首先要描述图片中蕴含的社会现象，表明自己对于图片的看法和观点，详细分析辅导班过重对于孩子以及亲子关系的影响，最后对这种现象提出自己的建议。
【好词好句】
extracurricular class 课外辅导班
take a break 休息
backfire 发生意外, 产生事与愿违的后果；适得其反
pay emphasis on 着眼于；着重于
Just as the saying goes 俗话说
all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy只工作不玩,聪明的孩子也会变傻
deep-rooted 根深蒂固的
educational institution 教育机构
nerd 讨厌的人；呆子
1. Ultimately, taking too many courses could do serious damage to their health, without which all their efforts may backfire.
最终，上太多课程可能会严重损害他们的健康，如果没有这些，他们的所有努力都可能适得其反。
2. Just as the saying goes, all work and no play make Jack a dull boy.
俗话说得好，只工作不玩,聪明的孩子也会变傻。
3. For example, parents worry that their children might lose the race on the starting line if not taking the class.
例如，父母担心如果不上课，他们的孩子可能会在起跑线上输掉比赛。
【优秀范文】
From the picture, we can see a mom is grabbing her daughter by the hand in a rush to get to the next extracurricular class. The child is trying to call someone on the phone, asking for help. In my opinion, kids should not be forced to attend such extracurricular classes.
For one thing, such classes have become a heavy burden on the children. At a very young age, they would have to take such after-school classes, such as English, Math and painting. They could hardly take a break. Many have been deprived of their free time after school. Ultimately, taking too many courses could do serious damage to their health, without which all their efforts may backfire. For another thing, paying too much emphasis on study may make the kid become a nerd. Just as the saying goes, all work and no play make Jack a dull boy. In the future, the child might lack social skills.
Given this, the deep-rooted causes must be addressed. For example, parents worry that their children might lose the race on the starting line if not taking the class. In this sequence, the government must regulate the educational institutions and reform the system to solve the problem.
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