10月晨读复盘

作者: Arwen1107 | 来源:发表于2018-10-27 20:55 被阅读82次

    这已经是我第二次参加晨读了,这个月的状况比我想象中的复杂,艰难,而且我完成的也没有计划的好,甚至沮丧和自责,家里小学生要期中考,每晚复习功课到深夜,加之临时公出培训,晚上也要培训。背诵都是忙里偷闲,跑到公司的小黑屋或是酒店会议室完成的。晨读期间晚上我都在退缩,今天那么那么累,明天不如偷偷懒就不起来晨读了。但是每天早上我都自然醒来参加晨读直播,这点我做到了我也克服自己爱赖床的习惯,但是有点很遗憾,我还是没有勇气在10分钟的cold call举手。晨读学习中,对个人的收获。首先,有时候我们总说要欣然接受别人的意见,但直面接受别人的judge时,心中还是会丝丝的不快,resist,这一点小我的情绪在上个月晨读中尤其明显,但这个月我可以欣然接受大家的反馈和指正,在背诵chains of segregation… 这段时我以为我完成的很ok,sherry老师说我的chain读的有问题,我回听好几次,确实ei是我的语音盲点之一,我会念成ae,那一晚上我花了很多时间去纠正这个音。我觉得接受别人的意见去改正,去刻意练习会让自己更进一步。第二,在给别人意见时一定要double check,我记得史妍小伙伴读mississippi我说应该发pi的音,因为我也有过质疑是不是也可以读成bi,我就随手查了牛津读的是pi,我就认为是pi,在史妍小伙伴提出一起讨论后,我又查了欧陆,问了siri,他们也读了bi,所以说来bi和pi都是可以的。如同交给领导的数据一样,反馈也是要经过一遍遍反复验证和校对,不然会造成别人的不适。最后,我对自己的一点点愿景,我希望下个月假如能成功报名晨读,我想做的更好,突破自己的舒适区。每次看到小伙伴的复盘我都会感慨大家写的好好,好羡慕,但是我觉得我就和自己比,今天比明天进步,那就是收获,我可以慢点,但一定要稳扎稳打。下面10天的晨读知识整理里,今天一大早7点就把这10天内容再刷了一遍,给自己10天的学习做个最后的梳理。

    Day 1

    I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.

    happy选词接地气,真诚,生活化的用词,不需要用fancy的词语looks smart

    go down in history/take your place in

    history 名垂千古

    join /join with观察两者的区别,有的词会读不代表你会那么写

    看懂读懂不代表你会,一定要明白作者为什么那么写,明白每个语块之间的意思。

    如何读,遇到to,in,as,for之后稍微停顿这样让听话人更清楚一件件事的逻辑感。

    Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation.

    five score years ago写法致敬葛底斯堡演讲

    a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation

    对学习的启示明白为什么这么写,语音之间的韵律,声音的美,令人印象深刻。

    写一段话要有层次,分主次信息。

    插入语作用减缓一个句子的节奏。

    This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice.

    momentous =important,苹果发布会也用到这个词。

    a great beacon light of hope 这个语块放在一起记,利用搜索图片来理解一个语意,一图胜千言。

    sear:指煎牛排,灼烧,比较文学性的用法。

    如何背诵,知道语意,知道怎么念,知道语块在哪里,注意细节。

    It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.

    joyous=happy,两者不能互换

    a joyous news

    end:是个好用的词

    曲终人散when a song ends,people scatter.

    语音练习慢下来,每个音都要发清楚。

    Day 2

    But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination.

    trope指反复的意象比如反复出现的one hundred years later

    the Negro still is not free.从学习的角度上,is放在still前后没有区别。语言讲究的习惯。

    cripple与前段free遥相呼应

    the manacles of segregation和the chains of discrimination.分别为一个语块,平行结构,而且压尾韵。在写句子中可参考,找一个准确的动词,比如cripple,再两个接近的事物,再考虑音律。

    重视小词的作用比如sadly

    One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity.

    island,s不用发音

    马金路德的语言好在用了大量的比喻,让人有画面感。比如a lonely island of poverty(指黑人当时的状况) in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. (指美国当时的繁荣)

    poverty和prosperity押韵

    One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land.

    languish=suffer比较文学的单词,显得庄严。

    being bedded by emperor被翻牌

    society不加冠词,enter society进入社会

    find+名词(oneself)/ing

    And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.

    dramatize:使新人瞩目

    ize后的词realize,critize,finalize,idolize,demonize,monetize,weaponize(电影蚁人)

    例句:Eric monetize his popularity.

          they weaponized me.

    a elephant in the room.假装看不到.

    tip:可利用微信语言输入,确认自己的准确程度。

    Day 3

    In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check.

    to cash a check语块放一起念。

    in a sense可以这么说

    cash a check类比,比喻的用法。

    When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir.

    heir,h不发音

    语音tips:念一长段话不要只看标点符号断句,遇到小句主语部分可以稍微停顿。

    architect熟词生义,指活动,项目的发起人。

    This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness."

    as well as需连读,

    A as well as B=not only B but also A

    此处强调的A,即强调黑人。

    guaranteed sb sth/ sth.

    It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned.

    obvious联想还可以怎么写,如evident。要有意识每学一个新词要对旧词进行复习.多关注同义反义词丰富词汇。

    defaulted on违约,可以放在一起记忆。

    Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds."

    a bad check,bad很接地气,准确。

    the Negro people a bad check, a check﹉可以学习这种重复方式。

    insufficient funds余额不足,此处用的很形象。

    talk a talk嘴上说说

    Day 4

    But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation.

    语音tips:慢下来,把每个音都念清楚。

    bankrupt很形象,引申的用法,注意词上的比喻。

    morally bankrupt道德沦丧

    in the great vault of,vault用的很应景

    经济雪人的

    a brake on demand in china,brake原意是刹车,此处很应景指低迷。

    And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.

    a hard act to follow 难以去追随。

    rich熟词生义指证券,意象表达。

    We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism.

    hallow对应前文scared

    halllow spot指前文的nation's capital,即在英文写作里能用代词表述,就不需重复表述,注意换词,词汇的多样性。

    I am no (not)singer.我不会唱歌。no更好,起强调作用。

    Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice.

    make real玩真的

    factor sth in或是factor in.sth宾语很长的话可以放在句子后。

    dark and desolate压头韵

    valley在诗歌和圣经中经常出现的意象。

    Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God's children.

    quicksand指在文中危险的情境,有画面感。

    solid 干货,或指人靠谱。

    rock可以依靠的人或物。

    my dad is my rock.我爸是我可以依靠的人。

    children不要读成中文的秋,关注于chill。

    Day 5

    It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro's legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality.

    语音tips:the的念法,语块放在一起去练,念,实际去用时不用去考虑是读成di 或de。

    sweltering summer,头韵

    legitimate合理,有必要

    this is legitimate concern.这是必要的担忧。

    this is legitimately incredible.

    butcher

    Do I butcher it?我是不是念错你的名。

    Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow off steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual.

    tips:不会念的词分解开读,end 和beginning要读出对比的效果来,核心的语调放在对比词上。

    rude熟词生义,unexpected突如其来的

    猝不及防的狗粮 it came as a rude PDA(public display affection)

    tips:遇到好玩的词可以即时造句,方便记忆。

    And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.

    grant联想guaranteed.

    emerge此类不及物动词使得表述更有逼格。

    But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred.

    tip:that I 断句可以连读

    rightful place和wrongful deed对称写法

    thirst for=long for渴求

    Day 6

    We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.

    plane熟词生义高度,思想高度

    degenerate降级

    majestic heights等于前句plane

    The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny.

    militancy本段指好的交战状态,因为前面出现marvelous,且白人也一同参与加入抗议。

    engulf 指情感涌现。在此处很形象,

    好的词,好在三个方面,1准确2形象3声音美

    come to/get to realize通过…了解什么…体现变化的过程,有转化的过程。

    quick and dirty answer不假思索的答案.

    tie up with…息息相关。

    And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.We cannot walk alone.

    inextricably 发音上联系前面学过的unalienable.

    bound =tie up with息息相关

    And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead. We cannot turn back.

    语音tip:walk,l不发音

    there is no turning back没有回头路

    There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "When will you be satisfied?" We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities.

    police brutality警察暴行,可以放一起记忆

    heavy with=fill with充满,比较文学用法

    口味重 I am heavy on salt.

    light on ice少冰

    We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only."

    mobility移动,工作,社会,阶级移动性

    ghetto/slum贫民窟

    self-hood在文中指缺乏教育缺乏自我。

    Day 7

    We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are not satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."

    语音tip:地名重音都放在后面,如New york,Shanghai

    waters水域

    语言大多是个习惯,有时候需要死磕,有时就要live with it.

    I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality.

    not unmindful在平时多练习双重否定,如not uncommon起到强调及肯定的效果。

    trials and tribulations一起记忆,指大灾大难。

    fresh from boat刚下船

    batter破旧,磨损,连续击打

    stagger不断被破坏

    You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive.

    veteran老司机,文中指经历不断折磨的人

    Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive.祈使句,省略了let's.

    Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.

    熟悉美国地名

    Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.

    wallow in mud在泥土里打滚,本文wallow指沉浸,沉湎于绝望。

    Day 8

    And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.

    从本段起开始脱稿,即兴高潮部分。

    deeply root in根深蒂固

    前7天主要为晓之以理,本段起即兴发挥动之以情。

    I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."

    语音tips,

    1.truths, th和s在一起,th可以不读,因为两者发音位置比较相近,采用折中的办法,即s发音比较强,听到的更多是s的音,所以th不用发音。

    2. created想要读的好听在i和ei中间加入j的音。

    self-evident=crystal clear/clear cut不言而喻,显而易见

    I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.

    语音练习不是你练了多少遍,在练习中寻求反馈和进步。需刻意练习

    son/one发音

    I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.

    I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.

    I have a dream today!

    donot judge a book by its cover

    肤色

    fair/pale/dark/tan/light

    语音tip,the color of their skin but by the content of their character.要念出对比的感觉。

    get something out of your chest 即兴

    演讲中有感染力的词,imagine,有画面感。

    Day 9

    I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of "interposition" and "nullification" --

    语调上扬指还没说完

    语调不宜过杨,不宜太平。

    当遇到单词问题可通过查字典,语法问题可通过上下文推荐,文化背景问题可通过网络搜索查询。

    one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.

    I have a dream today!

    语音tips,sisters and brothers放一起读。指兄弟姐妹

    形容词+名词如black boys,重音在哪里强调就在哪里。girl friend重音在前面为女朋友,重音在后面指女性的朋友。white house重音在后面为白宫,重音前面为白色的房子。

    I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; "and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."

    crooked形容词读/krukid/,过去分词读/krukd/

    crooked teeth牙齿不整齐

    frame设套

    This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the South with.With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope.

    在9个 I have a dream后,此处三个with this faith的排比使其势气增强,荡气回肠。

    With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.

    work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together.韵律不断变化,气势达到最强。

    stand up for维护

    Day 10

    And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.

    Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.

    Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.

    prodigious巨大的,文学性强些

    prodigal son浪子回头(圣经故事)

    Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.

    Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.如何读好,在于ring,要读出排比的感觉。

    Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.

    Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.

    But not only that:

    Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.

    Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.

    Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.

    From every mountainside, let freedom ring.

    snow-capped银装素裹可以学习,比如iron-clad被铁覆盖,指东西很坚固。

    Let freedom ring from xx多次重复,感情升华。

    let a mountain out of a molehill.小题大做

    take everything with a garin of salt.带着怀疑的态度学习一切。

    最后,11月继续加油!

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