TOPIC
Write a criticism of a celebrity. It can be a particular celebrity or the whole idea of celebrity in general. Use some of the language you have learned for criticizing in this lesson.
TEACHER'S NOTE
Punctuation: Kindly note that the punctuation the comma mark (,) is used in writing to show a short pause or to separate things in a list. e.g.,".......drifting with people’s dreams. In someway, they carry the dreams.....". Spacing: Kindly note that after each word and punctuation a single space should be provided, not more than that e.g.,"......they carry the dreams’ weight. Pressure is like slow poison to celebs...".
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Celebrities, the most talked about topics nowadays, characterize our modern era in history of mankind. Even gossiping columnists and critics who comment on celebs become famous themselves. Societies and its trends could not get wrong. There must be some reasons behind these phenomena. Reviewing from my own life experiences, I would say that people make celebrates.
Modern society, with its material abundance, provides various tempting opportunities to all individuals, making our life full of dreams, competition and unexpectedness. People are often frustrated, with their dreams been battered. However, nobody would accept that they are improperly dreaming for a better life, even though one has temporarily failed to realize it on one’s own side. “Somebody else can! My dream has been proved!” In that way, the incarnations of people’s dreams become celebrities.
Anyone who understands people, society and the desires of other people's heart, one is ready to become a celebrity. Someone may carefully plan to be a celeb. Someone may be just because of lucky chances. Anyway, as soon as they become celebs, they feel pressure, because they are floating and drifting with people’s dreams. In someway, they carry the dreams’ weight.
Pressure is like slow poison to celebs’ mental and physical health. Statistics show the suicide rates among celebrities are four-times higher than that among normal people. We also often hear that someone suffers from bad health condition while his or her career life is just blooming.
To speed your success, you watch up the trends, understand what people’s yearning for, and you need to be prepared and patiently wait for some events which bring you fame and possibly fortune. In modern days, with multiplied media coverage, to be famous is not hard. But so what? As Andy Warhol, an American avant-garde artist, predicted, everyone could become worldwide famous for 15 minutes. Fifteen Minutes! If we are truly treasure our life, we should pursuit something more meaningful to the society and ourselves.
Our deeds and virtues should stand the rush of torrential time. In short, as I see it, we shouldn’t take it for granted. Being celebrities or not, we are the same, with the same life struggling and suffering.
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