题目
Write a paragraph about your career path. What is your work experience and education? What are your plans for the future? Has the economy affected your career? Remember to use adverbs of sequence to order your career events.
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A detailed description of your education and work experience in China and US. Review the difference in usage of 'me/myself' I didn't understand what you meant when you said: "..political science holds far more the commonly recognized values in our world"?
My major was political science in college in Beijing. Before my graduation, I had taken part in the student movement and become a leader in it. After that, for some political reason in China, my college degree got compromised, leaving me as a life-long self-made student. Without a diploma, I had to look for a job irrelevant to my higher education background in Shenzhen, a coastal city in southern part of China, where most Chinese then thought as the front for China's opening and reform. Few years later, the first stock maker bubble burst and the economy fell dramatically. Prior to my managing to immigrate to US, many local residents and I had become broke. Finally, I settled down in New York.Subsequently, I enrolled myself into a local college and continue to study political science that holds far more than the commonly recognized values in my motherland. Meanwhile I was falling back onto my favorite social activities--promoting civil rights in China, and became a veteran. At the same time, keeping myself financially capable for my family was always on the top of my agenda. In those years, I witnessed American prosperity, economy turning back and market picking up. I set up my own company and learned to trade stocks on my own. Nevertheless, during the carnival, who could feel the financial crisis was creeping near? Fighting against the crisis in some way, shape or form, I turned myself penniless again.
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