题目
Computers and Internet have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
第一次写
Advancements in technology have made a significant difference to the way in which people work, which means more and more people are able to work from home. Though this is mostly beneficial, there are some negative aspects that would also be considered.
Beginning with positive points, the ability to complete the task on a computer means that people no longer need to cope with them in offices. This means that it could save plenty of commuting time. This is most manifest in the case of people who live far away from the company. Simultaneously, it also does those living in a city that has a serious traffic congestion problem a lot of favor. Time saved on the way to and from the office could be used to do something more valuable such as preparing materials for a meeting, summarizing today’s work and finishing more tasks.
中心词最好做同义替换，不要用it代替
In addition, people can get more job opportunities if more and more companies allow employees to work from home. Meanwhile, enterprises also could attract more talent by offering home based positions. For example, a company could recruit talent scarce in local sites from another country. With a policy that allows people to work from home, human resources could be utilized more efficiently so that people have more chances to find satisfying jobs.
On the downsides, compared with working in offices, working from home will reduce communication efficiency. Firstly, people are more likely to communicate by typing when working from home, which takes more time than oral communication. Secondly, the network situation sometimes is unstable so that people fail to contact each other at that moment. Last but not least, face to face to seek help takes less waiting time than asking for help online.
In conclusion, although there are potential disadvantages of working from home, they are outweighed by the positives.
第二次写
Advancements in technology have made a significant difference to the way in which people work, which means more and more people are able to work from home. Though this is mostly beneficial, there are some negative aspects that would also be considered.
Beginning with positive points, the ability to complete the task on a computer means that people no longer have to cope with them in offices. This means that home-based work could save plenty of commuting time, which is most manifest in the case of people who live far away from the workplace. Simultaneously, remote work also does a favor for those living in metropolises with serious traffic congestion. Time saved on the way from and to the office could be used to do something more valuable, such as having a rest, summarizing today’s work and finishing more tasks.
In addition, people can get more job opportunities if more and more companies allow employees to work from home. Meanwhile, enterprises also could attract more talents by offering home based positions. For example, the young people will be more likely to find their desirable work without the compromise of living far away with families; and that project difficult for locals could be conducted smoothly with the direction of experts overseas. With a policy that allows people to work from home, human resources could be effectively utilized so that people have more chances to find satisfying jobs.
On the downsides, compared with working in offices, working from home will conversely impact communication efficiency. Firstly, people are more likely to send messages or emails when working from home, which takes more time than oral communication.Secondly, the network situation sometimes is unstable so that people fail to contact each other synchronously. Last but not least, it takes less time to seek help face to face rather than wait online.
In conclusion, although there are some potential disadvantages of working from home, they are outweighed by the positives.
词货积累
Advancements in technology make a significant difference to the way in which people work
科技的进步使人们的工作方式有了很大的不同
Though this is mostly beneficial, there are some negative aspects that would also be considered
虽然这主要是有益的，但也有一些负面的方面需要考虑。
Beginning with positive points
从积极的观点开始
This means that home-based work could save plenty of commuting time, which is most manifest in the case of people who live far away from the workplace
这意味着在家工作可以节省大量的通勤时间，这在住得离工作地点很远的人身上体现得最明显
Metropolises with serious traffic congestion
交通拥堵严重的大都市
The young people will be more likely to find their desirable work without the compromise of living far away with families
年轻人将更有可能找到他们想要的工作，而不必与家人住得很远
that project difficulty for locals could be conducted smoothly with the direction of experts overseas.
在海外专家的指导下，这个对当地人来说很困难的项目可以顺利进行
conversely impact communication efficiency
会消极影响沟通效率
It takes less time to seek help face to face rather than wait online
面对面寻求帮助比在线等待需要更少的时间
Though there are some potential disadvantages of xxx , it is outweighed by the positives.
虽然xxx有一些潜在的缺点，但它们被积极的方面所压倒。
同义替换
remote work/ home-based work/ work from home
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