A very special day

Today,Is special.It had a ChryslerSky.The sun is Hide,bright,Like a Light.It has tree ,Plants,Everywhere.Some clouds is like a Pig,Some cloudIs like Sheep.SomeOff the plant is NamedClimbingMountainTiger.A plane is FlyingOn the sky.And my families are happy ,What a nice day.The pig cloud And the Sheep cloud.are playing.This is So Special!

八岁儿子的第一篇英文日记

周老师修改稿:

A Very Special Day

Today is special.It had a chrysler sky.The sun is hide,bright,like a light.

There are trees and plants everywhere.Some clouds look like pigs,and some cloud like sheeps.

Some of the plant is named Climbing Mountain Tiger.A plane is flying in the sky.

My families are happy .What a nice day.The pig cloud and the sheep cloud are playing.lt is so special!