具体方法如下:
四六级作文要求字数差不多,120~150字150字是一个什么样的概念?撑破天十一二个长句子就结束了,一来方便,二来可以博得阅卷老师眼球,岂不双收?
可是我只会写 "It's better to......;It's important to......;In my opinion.....;There is......As an old saying......"怎么办??不举例子了,"I think..."的使用频率有多高就不说了……
图片发自公众号英语奇妙物语只会写这些短句子或者比这些好一点怎么办呢?其实很简单,耍一些花招,把短句变成长句,骗过阅卷老师的眼睛,让他尽可能给你好的分数 因为:
四六级阅卷老师只有不到30s的时间看你的试卷就要给你一个分数。如果你文中出现垃圾词,你的能力就会被估算出来,那么这篇文章就会被大打折扣,给你一个毫不留情的分数以保证其与你在前面所做题得到的分数是成正比的(就算你前面做的很好也没有用,老师看不到前面的成绩,只能以你作文的水平做个估算),这样阅卷老师的评分水平就不会超过机器限定的某一个范围以保证他来年可以继续参加阅卷(评判阅卷老师的评分能力该是用了机器学习方法。
短句变长句的三原则:
要先想好要写的短句,然后对这个短句进行以下加工
三原则之间可以相互叠加使用
原则一:背景原则:
来个例句:Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of the science and technology in the contemporary society.随着科学技术在当代社会的飞速发展
背景就是:Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of.......随着....巨大的进步,....怎么样。把这句话套在这里:Along with the remarkable advancement of China's economy,the price of housing is higher and higher.
当然可能有更好的套用方法,顺便再添油加醋:Along with the remarkable advancement in the science of vaccination has yielded a much-improved quality of life and health among the world, by eradicating and help in fighting many infectious diseases.
相信你一定会在考试的时候想方设法套用这句话的,无论什么题目,总能把这个帽子加进去。
原则二:帽子原则:
例句:Nobody could fail to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是:越来越多的中国人喜欢庆祝一些西方节日。
帽子就是:Nobody could fail to notice the fact that.....没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是......
上面这句话与以下短语等价:
There is no denying that......
It is widely accepted that......
It is universally acknowledged that.....
It can't be denied that.......
这就意味着随时换着句子用而不被发现,就算发现了也没什么的,因为水平确实不在高中了。
对了,再介绍一个很管用的帽子:
帽子二:As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily / the Economist / the Chinese Academy of Science....正如《中国日报》/《经济学人》/ 中科院 所做的趣味调查一样......
至于后面该加些什么就看情况而定了,只要你想加就一定能加的。
假设我们作文题目是关于旅游的,我们就可以这样写:
As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily,people in expanding numbers are getting interested in traveling.正如《中国日报》所做的趣味调查一样,越来越多的人对旅游感兴趣。
原则三:插足原则:
顾名思义,这里主要讲的就是往句子里插入单词,句子,短语。
首先介绍几个万能的插足词:
我认为:for my part , from my own perspective..
程度状语:undoubtedly(毫无疑问),definitely(清楚地)ps:插足条件:主谓之间
例句:
Writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man.写作,毫无疑问,让人变得严谨。
Nobody could fail to notice the fact that the Internet , from my own perspective,is becoming increasingly popular.在我看来,没有人可以否认那就是互联网正变得越来越受欢迎。(这句话把原则二和三用在一起了)
最后加一个三原则一起使用的例子:
Along with the tremendous advancement of the science and technology in contemporary city,nobody could fail to notice the fact that writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man. 随着科技在当代城市的飞速发展,毫无疑问,没有人可以否认一个事实那就是写作使人严谨。
当你把几个想法先用短句描述一遍,在加上帽子,背景什么的,要能合在一起最好了,不能也没关系;而且这些方法可以反复用而不出现重复,但很可惜背景法则只能用一次。
三原则到这里就介绍完了,接下来该说说“垃圾词“怎么处理了
什么是垃圾词?这个要看我们自身的水平,对于我来说,写作文时第一想到的词全部都是垃圾词!都要换!
这里只举一些我常用到的垃圾词和处理方法了(处理方法就是换掉他):
垃圾词:替换词(不同词语之间我都用分号隔开了,这样更容易看清楚一些)
think :assume;Hold the idea that+句子; maintain; conceive;as far as I am concerned ; from my point of view
people:individuals; characters; folks
some/many : a slice of; an ocean of ; a multitude of; a host of; a variety of; a diversity of; various; diverse
very:decidedly; intensely; overwhelmingly; exceedingly
important:play a critical role in day-to-day life; fundamental and elementary; of great importance; significant--significance; indispensable,and crucial
advantage: benefits; dominance; superiority; merit
disadvantage: shortcoming; deficiency; handicap; flaw
in my opinion:for my part; in my personal sense; from my point of view; as far as I am concerned; from my own perspective
for example:taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list: (这里注意随便举一个例子就好,不要举的太多,看句子意思就明白了)
more and more people:people in expanding numbers
be interested in: sth appeals to sb ; sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb
带来坏的影响:exert a negative and unfavorable impact on......
带来好的影响:exert a favorable and positive impact on........
今天这份写作速成攻略,在考试前每天温习一遍写作,妥妥的~
图片发自英语奇妙物语
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