英语作文写作（考试 四六级）
这是我在博士英语课程学习到五段式写论文的方法，和大家分享一下。这种方法很适合四六级考试用，有时我们考试的时候总害怕字数不够怎么办掌握这种方法，字数蹭蹭蹭就上来了。
第一段：Background+论点+加三个支撑的论据。
第二段：第一个论据。展开描述。
第三段：第二个论据。展开描述。
第四段：第三个论据。展开描述。
最后一段：总结（重申论点论据）+思考。
以下文章都是本人自己写的，供大家一起学习：
#第一篇：议论文（环保）
In the present century, with the rapid development of the economy and industry, the life of people become more comfortable and convenient. The majority of dwellers in city has private cars and various household appliances. Additionally, large numbers of industries exist in city. However, the air inmodern cities is increasing worse and some strategies must be taken to stop this situation such as planting more trees, limiting the private car drivingand using new and green energy.
First of all, since the air become worse, planting more tree is a good way to take inthe polluted air and produce more fresh air. People in numbers have realized that the importance of planting more trees to recover the polluted air.
Moreover, the government should issue a series of laws and regulations to limit the private car driving. As a college student, we should also encourage our family, friends and classmates to take buses or bicycles in order to reduce the polluted airproduction.
Finally, and the most importantly, we should increase the use of the new green energy such as wind and polar energy instead of using tradition energy like coal. Using new energy can decrease the emissions of green house gas and prevent global warming.
In summary, it is urgent to take some methods such as the three points I described above to improve the air quality or it will hurt our health like causing somelung diseases and destroy our planet. Therefore, let us do it right now to protect our health and earth.
下面是这篇文章外教老师给的修改意见！总体来说就是写得少了些，应该write more words and more details.
外教老师给的修改意见
#第二篇：描述性文章
Everyone has their ways to enjoy life. Today I want to describe something I love with you about one thing, a person, and a place, which is my new electric toothbrush,my girlfriend, and my graduate school respectively.
First of all, I would like to describe my new electric toothbrush. The color of this new electric toothbrush is light green, which makes me happyand relaxed every morning. Compared to traditional toothbrush, electric toothbrush has multiple advantages including brushing my teeth cleaner and saving time (only costs two minutes). Of course, the most important reason I like this new electric toothbrush is that my girlfriend bought it for me as a gift.
In addition, I would like to describe my lovely girlfriend. She is the most beautiful girl in the world. She bought various things to me, such as electric toothbrush, new clothes and some cute and interesting handmade gadgets. She always shares delicious food to me and buy some fruits and snacks to me. Shealways takes care of me when I am sick and encourages me when I am upset. Because of her, I become more confident and excellent. I am so lucky to have such a girlfriend.
Finally, I would like to describe my graduate school, University of Chinese Academy of Science (UCAS), located in Beijing.The UCAS has beautiful sceneries with diverse buildings, trees and flowers. Since I am from south China and I stay here just only one semester and this is the first time I saw the heavy snow. It is lucky for me and I was so excited to see the beautiful school in the snow with my girlfriend. The UCAS is also the closest location to science, where students work hard in science and engineering.
In summary, I love my new electric toothbrush, my girlfriend, and my graduate school and I am grateful and cherish the life I have now.
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