雅思写作是一项比较难提高的的科目，主要是由于词汇语法和逻辑思维都有所差异，那么有哪些写作方式是比较常见的错误呢？
中式英文
Topic1-The happiest moment in your life
>>In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…
Topic2- The population problem
>>The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today's business world?
>>I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…
观点模糊态度暧昧
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
>>I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me…
语法错误惨不忍睹
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?(雅思真题)
>>About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
意思重复原地踏步
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
>>My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
中国俗语胡乱翻译
Topic1 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
>>We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”…
Topic2- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/herfamily?
>>Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat's son can make hole…
Topic 3- The advantage of being a nice person
>>I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese peoplealways say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
观点武断 态度强硬
Topic1-The importance of confidence
>>In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
>>I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy！ For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.
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