1月3日邮件写作反馈
问询邮件
1、简要介绍自己，以及是如何知道对方邮箱（得体性）
2、清晰、简要描述《经济学人》封面，提出自己的困惑和问询内容（写作目的）
3、邮件标题
4、换位思考，看怎样对方会更容易回复你（个人邮件不一定会得到回复）
5、不超过130个单词，含标点
6、手机客户端阅读习惯，一屏阅读感官
Subject：
Quick question（a可省略 inquiry比较正式） on a figure on the latest The Economist cover（目标、内容、信息范围）
Hi David，(非正式邮件的写作称呼，hi hello+first name 可不带Mr）
I am a The Economist reader and have been amused and impressed by your cartoons.The fascination led me to your personal website and more of your works.
As usual，I enjoyed your caricature of the outgoing（exodus） Silicon Valley entrepreneurs and delightfully discovered the skateboarder being Peter Thiel.Meanwhile,the identity（主语的不同体现句子的多样性） of the bespectacled （戴眼镜的 ）youth on the electric scooter has been bugging me for days.(I tried all the means imaginable to dig it out,but failed.)
It’d be great if you could tell me the name of the young guy.Thanks in advance.
Best regards from Beijing
Justin
Cartoonist：David Parkins
I am a wee bit embarrassed about this:(:后解释原因）
With all good wishes.
Astronomic rising costs（天文数字般的花费）
What a thrill to hear from you!(!精少使用)
Part of the pleasure of watching cartoons lies in the fun involved in figuring out certain details,whether intended or not by cartoonists.In this regards,it was a fun pursuit and I don not regret a bit the energy spent.
I look forward to more of your creativity(替代creativity cartoon，抽象名词的简洁性）.
感谢类邮件
1、标题
2、150字
Subject:
A thank you note（一段话、几段话）from OID Financial Summit
Dear Dr.Chang,(对对方的了解，是否在意教职、称呼)
Keynote speech主题演讲
China’s One Belt One Road Initiative
What are the opportunities for MENA？was much appreciated and contributed to a highly successful event .（contribute to避免重复出现感谢）
Post-speech discussion
Feedback from...are positive（代替good）.
Once again
如何写邮件介绍朋友认识？
How are things？(How have you been\How are you doing\How is Tokyo\How is work)It’s been quite a while since we met last time...(I can not believe it’s been five years...)
I am writing because an American friend of mine named Peter is going to visit Tokyo for one week from January 20th.（紧凑 信息量大）
His Japanese is minimal（limited 、survival Japanese）
be excited to learn..（excited about doing sth、be excited about/by/with/over）
Locals( Are you originally from Beijing?)
Once I heard his travel plan,you immediately came to mind.
Make friends=looking to expand your social network
You may meet for meal or coffee during his stay in Tokyo.
Please drop me a line when you have a time.
Business emails with professional empathy（同感、共鸣）.
小结：邮件标题：写明去信目的以及让对方有及时回复的欲望（换位思考）
邮件内容：小词的用法、字数的掌控、逻辑的排列、情感的掌控
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