美文网首页教育语言·翻译
【中考满分作文:你确定不点进来】

【中考满分作文:你确定不点进来】

作者: 杨诗雨y | 来源:发表于2017-04-19 09:27 被阅读72次

    为了更好地开展2017年全民阅读活动,有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见,你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿,提出自己的想法和建议。

    要点提示:

    阅读的好处:

    你的建议(如:建更多小型图书馆,经常性地介绍好书等);

    . . . . . .

    要求:

    词数:80词左右开头,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

    文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。

    Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    【例文】

    Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. As far as I’m concerned reading books can not only broaden our horizon, but also can build our confidence. At the same time ,Bacon is said:“Studies serve for delight, for ornament ,and for ability.”

    First and foremost, How about building lots of Small libraries in the city? Additionally, if meaningful books can be introduced often, more people will be interested in reading. Last but not least, if the seats in the libraries are very comfortable, people will enjoy reading there a lot.

    Let’s from a good habit of learning from now on. Thank for listening!

    【例文讲解】

    Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us.

    (这个句子写得不够好,可以把very替换成为extremely )

    As far as I’m concerned reading books can not only broaden our horizon, but also can build our confidence.

    (1. As far as I’m concerned =I think,我认为的意思,高逼格√。备注:可以用一辈子,far:遥远的,concerned:关心)

    (2. Not only…but also… 不仅… 而且… ,介绍一个东西的好处,把字数写开了。“前倒后不倒” ,前面要用倒装,把be动词和情态动词助动词提前;后面用正常的语句来写。

    (3. Can可以替换成另一个单词:Be able to=can ,be要根据主语来换)

    (4. Broaden our horizon拓宽我们的视野

    (5. Build our confidence.树立我们的自信心

    At the same time, Bacon is said: “Studies serve for delight, for ornament ,and for ability.”

    (1) At the same time【酷炫的句子√】与此同时

    (2) Studies serve for delight, for ornament ,and for ability.读书足以怡情,足以富彩,足以长才。中文解释:读书能够使人很快乐、充实,了解到很多的知识,穿着一件华丽的衣服,知识改变力量…【必须得背】

    First and foremost, How about building lots of Small libraries in the city?

    (1) 第一第二第三都用这些,不要写first second third,特别low:

    First and foremost第一

    Additionally第二(其次)

    Last but not least 第三(最后一点)

    (2) 提意见不要只会用Can,可以用Be able to,How about doing sth.

    Additionally, if meaningful books can be introduced often, more people will be interested in reading.

    1. introduce 介绍

    2. be动词+动词ed表示被动

    3. 这个句子的精华就在于是物作主语,后面的主语做的是被动。

    4. Be interested in doing sth对…感兴趣

    Last but not least, if the seats in the libraries are very comfortable, people will enjoy reading there a lot.

    1. if要用上主将从现,

    2. very可以替换成 extremely

    3. 表示喜欢的句型:

    学渣:I like…/ enjoy

    学霸:I really into

    学神:I am a big fan of…

    Let’s from a good habit of learning from now on. Thank for listening!

    1. a of b是 b的a一个学习的好习惯 a、b都是名词

    2.from now on从现在开始

    若有误之处,欢迎指点。

    相关文章

      网友评论

        本文标题:【中考满分作文:你确定不点进来】

        本文链接:https://www.haomeiwen.com/subject/cesczttx.html