译例分析-游戏文本

1. Everything about him is good

    暂译：有关他的一切都挺不错，达意但是不简洁，想在这里用个成语“完美无缺”，但是感觉程度太过

2. Today is the day when she is going to knock your breath out of you.

    暂译：今天就是她夺走你呼吸的日子。句意太直白，缺乏一种感觉，需要体现一种霸气中二的感觉

3. Reasoning and logic are on her side in any argument.

    定译：每次争辩理性和逻辑都与她同在。on her side

4. The arrows are her reasons, and the bow is her logic.

    定译：她将理性化作箭矢，将逻辑化作弯弓。这句译文还可以，但是能更简洁就好了，比如三国杀有一句“笔为刀，墨诛心”

5. Tough blows and a tough character are a good combination for a warrior.

    定译：作为一名战士，严酷的攻击手法和强硬的性格在她身上相得益彰。

    这里把“combination”隐去，意译为了“相得益彰”，可能有不妥之处，“相得益彰”有两相增长之意，combination没有此义，或许可译为“合二为一、完美融合、相辅相成”

6. Prolonged battles drive her crazy.

    定译：拖沓的战斗会令她很不爽。

7. If you make her angry, you risk being hit on the head.

    定译：如果你惹她生气了，你的头可能会遭殃。