分享一个例子

刚才看英语的时候，被这个例子惊讶到了，记忆下来。

《天净沙·秋思》

枯藤老树昏鸦，

小桥流水人家，

古道西风瘦马，

夕阳西下，

断肠人在天涯。

中文直接翻译：

Withered vines, an old tree, a crow at dusk,

A small bridge, flowing water, a cottage,

An old road, the west wind, a lean horse,

Sunset heartbroken people in the end of the world.

加了逻辑词的衔接

There, in the distance, are withered vines,

around an old tree, and a crow is sitting on it at dusk.

Not far from it, near a cottage, there exists a small bridge with running water under it.

Besides, a lean horse is walking on an ancient path in the west wind.

At the moment when the sun is setting,

a heartbroken man is far from home.

不得不服哇，这本书没白看。