头马演讲英文cc4要点[Judy译,和cc中文版有很大差异,想备稿英文的还是看我的翻译吧],此外惊觉语法的重要意义,我在新东方教遍最难的语法课,如果一开始为学生明确学习语法的这方面意义,恐怕在他们的学习动机方面又会添几捆柴。可惜当时还没有读心理学,也未曾与头马谋面!
1. Write for ears: short words, short sentences, and short paragraphs.
为耳朵写稿:单音节词,短句,短段落
2. Be specific: avoid words that are too general. Choose the word with connotations you wish to convey.
措辞精准:避免过于笼统的措辞,传达出词汇的暗示
3.Vivid words: appeal to the senses and be descriptive. Use verb instead of be. Use active voice instead of passive.
措辞生动:诉诸感官,描述性语言。使用实义动词而非be动词,主动语态而非被动语态。
4.Rhetorical devices: simile/metaphor/alliteration/triads
修辞方法:明喻/暗喻/头韵/排比
5.Use words economically
惜字如金
6.Avoid jargon
避免专业术语
7.Say it correctly: grammar and pronunciation.
正确使用语言:语法和发音正确是接受良好教育的标志
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