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托福写作练笔: Buy a house or a busines

托福写作练笔: Buy a house or a busines

作者: 杜小萤 | 来源:发表于2017-07-27 14:21 被阅读82次

    On the way of life, there are many crossroads where we have to make a choice. Making a right decision can sometimes change one’s whole life. With enough money to purchase either a house or a business, I will buy a business as my option without hesitation.

    In my eyes, houses are for people who need to settle down. Almost everyone can have a house in which they can relax and enjoy family life. People usually feel comfortable if they have a good place to dwell. However, there are still a lot of people who are homeless. Therefore, If I use my money to purchase a business, maybe I can make more money which can be used to help those poor people to live a better life.

    I am also a risk taker who is eager for a challenging and adventurous life. Staying in a house is truly a good way to get rid of tiring work, but for a young person like me, starting a business and make a difference is more enchanting. I can get to know more about the world of business, and some talented people in this field. These will be my cherished merits gained from the experience of business.

    Furthermore, I think to rent a house is a very proper choice for me rather than to buy one. Because of my business, I might usually go on a business trip to other cities and even countries, and I have to stay there for several months. I think I just need a place to live in, so to rent for a short period of time is a more wonderful idea than to buy a house in a certain place.

    On the whole, I think it is a fantastic option for me to buy a business. More things to gain, more people to meet, more experience to acquire, more possibility to help others. These things will make my life delightful and meaningful.

    插播: 最近休假,没事学学托福,想把185个独立写作题目都拿来练练。每篇规定自己限时半小时完成,写好了拿给我家元公子看。这家伙先给我发糖吃:写得好棒,语言流畅,观点鲜明,用词准确。正当我要飞上天际之时,元公子给我来了几句:

    境界欠缺,论据可以更深,第一篇,重点解释为什么选做生意,1.因为年轻,还不想settle down,2.有理想,实现个人的抱负和价值,3.通过做生意,给社会带来价值,回报社会。一开始说买房可以很舒适,这段不错,用一句“人人都想要舒适,但舒适往往意味着平淡”来转折。租房那一大段太low,太没境界了。

    一副好为人师要不完要不完的样子。如果不是想到这家伙在德阳辛苦工作,真想抓起臭袜子塞到他吐不出象牙的嘴里。

    不过仔细想想,元公子所说也挺中肯,不乏道理啊,建议嘛,也可采纳。于是刚刚咬牙切齿抓起臭袜子的手不觉松了松,然后打开水龙头抹起肥皂开始搓起来了。

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