最近几个月做了好些手机、摄像头方面的稿子,对一些术语不求甚解。虽然能大概写出来,但是还是没底。
之前每次都有提交术语,产品经理每次都审查了术语。只是到后面,看到库里头写法不太统一,心里头又混乱了。
总之,我缺乏一个求证的过程。不敢肯定的说,这个术语这样写非常准确,也解释不出来这里到底在说什么。我不希望,做这种稿子时,永远在考验自己的语法功底。
于是,今天我决定去Iphone官网看人家的手机参数介绍都用了什么词,顺便摘抄下来。下回用的时候,心里也有数。要是有人质疑,我至少可以说,老外也是这样写的,不信你去查官网!
以下内容摘抄自Iphone官网 https://www.apple.com/iphone-xr/
1. All-screen design. Longest battery life ever in an iPhone. Fastest performance. Water and splash resistant. Studio-quality photos and 4K video.
手机的几个性能都涉及到了。屏幕:全面屏设计;续航:超长续航能力;反应快;防水防溅;照相效果也很好,studio-quality,有在影楼拍照的效果(大概意思)。
2. Introducing Liquid Retina. The new display on iPhone XR is the most advanced LCD in the industry. An innovative backlight design allows the screen to stretch into the corners. So you see true-to-life color from one beautiful edge to the other.
发现现在的手机,产品介绍时有很大篇幅是在讲手机的屏幕、拍照多厉害,倒是打电话的性能讲得少。有时候翻着翻着,总感觉自己在做相机的稿子。。。
Liquid Retina 液态视网膜屏 backlight design 背光设计 true-to-life color 逼真的颜色(至少我想不到这个词)
3. The largest LCD ever on an iPhone / Industry-leading color accuracy / Wide color gamut 广色域 / True Tone 原彩 / Tap to wake 点击唤醒(估计我会翻成click to wake)
4. Seven-layer color process. The beautiful finishes of the back glass are achieved using an advanced process that allows for deep, rich colors. 这里介绍了手机背壳的漆面技术。还有发现,这种介绍里面喜欢用achieve, allow这种词。下回,我也多用一下。
5. Aerospace-grade aluminum bands. A special Apple‑designed alloy is precision‑machined to create structural bands, and anodized to complement the color of the back glass.
precision-machined 精加工
6. Wireless charging. The glass back allows iPhone XR to charge easily and wirelessly.
充电技术也是手机的一大重点。无线充电,边充边玩游戏,充电五分钟,用电两小时。这种会经常遇见。
7. Portrait mode. iPhone XR uses a single-lens camera and machine learning to keep people in the foreground in sharp focus against an artfully blurred background.
人像模式。广告里头喜欢说拍人也清晰之类的。single-lens camera 单镜头摄影机
人像模式能让人处于近景,把后面的背景全部模糊,形成强烈对比。
这种表达最好背下来,下次套用。
8. Enhanced bokeh effect. Portrait mode photos look even more professional thanks to a sophisticated background blur.
背景虚化效果更佳。
9. Smart HDR. New secondary frames, a faster sensor, and the powerful A12 Bionic chip bring more highlight and shadow detail to your photos.
bring more highlight and shadow detail 高光和阴影处的细节
10. Adjustable Depth Control. When editing portraits, you can now adjust the depth of field to get the amount of blur you want in the background.
景深控制 the depth of field 模糊度 the amount of blur
11. 12MP rear camera / ƒ/1.8 wide-angle lens / Portrait mode with Depth Control / 2x faster sensor for Smart HDR across your photos / 4K video up to 60 fps
rear camera 后摄像头/ wide-angle lens 广角镜头
总结:有试着看一篇很长的技术文摘,确实看不下去。怎么办呢?摒弃学术路线,去模仿,看老外怎么写的。模仿多了,总有一天能够立马写出地道的句子来吧!希望如此!
另外,目前确定深耕手机和合同两个领域的稿件吧。感觉还行,说不定哪天我就能积累好多术语,就跟之前积累的工程术语一样脱口而出!
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