2019年7月写作直播反馈（一）

自现象级英语

错在哪里、如何改、问题的归类

中文意思模糊

clarity of thought and writing 思考、想法的清晰性

人类：humans, humanity

更正：human activities have

简洁性

一般用a person---he代替即可

先应保证中文无歧义

spot on找准了

yield: 产生结果，产出

end up with, yield

更正 用词错误 比较级的使用 A moral: 语序 existing 的妙用

大英博物馆 The British Museum

首句改写 investments in investment 搭配不当 古典音乐的最大国家？ 消费者 录取率低 写得很好，唯一改的是大写Xiangji， consumption可以去掉

Personal Review

The debate about whether an English learner reduces mistakes by writing tends to divide commentators into two camps. The optimistic case is that learning a foreign language enhances a writer's understanding of his mother tongue and thus improves his output in both English and Chinese. To turn his stumbling blocks into stepping stones, one needs only to write relentlessly. The pessimists argue that practice makes permanent, but not perfect. A consicous author should know where to stop. 

Indeed, grammar is an average writer's largest obstacle, and semantics claims the number-two spot. Combined, they account for almost half of the potential pitfalls learners are going to run into. The penman's approach to the above-mentioned hurdles directly affects clarity and quality of his writing. 

Recommended reading: 9 Qualities of Good Writing