两个翻译哪个更确切啊？

中文是:

人生最好的意义，不是苦求名利或献身迷信，而是为了真正幸福。只有通过不断地学习智慧和修正行为而让自己和别人都生活得更美好，才能进而获得真正长久的快乐！

而译文有两个:

The best meaning of life is not to seek fame and fortune or to devote oneself to superstition, but to be truly happy. Only by constantly learning wisdom and correcting behavior can we live a better life for ourselves and others, and then we can achieve real long-term happiness!

与

The best meaning of life is not to seek fame and fortune or to be superstitious, but to be truly happy.  Only by constantly learning wisdom and correcting behaviors to make yourself and others live better, can you get real long-lasting happiness!

请亲们留言给我，哪个英译才更确切啊？