一、英文原题：In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
二、审题：这是一道妇女儿童保护社会大类的利弊观点型题目。我的直觉是利大于弊，所以我会采用一边倒的论证方法。女性休产假的弊端是：女性休假带来的个人收入的减少、对女性任职公司的人事变动的影响、女性长期休产假带来的与社会的脱节和知识、技能结构的过时以及重返职场的适应困难。女性休产假的优势当然也是显而易见，例如对婴儿更好的照顾、个人更好的休息和恢复、家庭和社会的和谐和稳定等等。
三、范文正文
Women taking maternity leave is known as a default practice in many countries in the world these days. Recently there appear some voices challenging this policy. The opponents contend that the drawbacks of this routine outweigh the strengthes. From my perspective, I side with the advocates’ view.
Although maternity break might lead to the reduction of the new mom’s income, disturbances of the personnel arrangement of the company in question and cause the adapting pains of women when they come back to the labor market so on and so forth, this traditional welfare to women could do them a load of benefits. First, it can help the women who have just reproduced an infant to better recover from the child birth labor both physiologically and psychologically. The reason is that instead of returning to the office doing their challenging duty immediately after the baby is born, women can stay at home being nicely looked after by the home nurses and the family members. Second, being at home all day, the baby can be better cared for by providing them with milk, clothing and company. Third, with a healthy and satisfactory mom and her happy and strong new born baby, both the family and the community can enjoy stronger harmony and stability.
In sum, the upsides of women taking maternity leave outweigh the downsides in my opinion. As for the issue of women lagged behind professionally due to prolonged maternity leave, women can try to update their knowledge and skill by themselves while staying at home taking care of their babies and they could also try flexible working time through networking online. （295 words)
三、范文评点
本文内容切题、主旨突出、行文顺畅、语言表达丰富、多变、自然和得体。注意正文使用了先抑后扬的写作手法使论证更加立体和有张力。结尾部分在总结全文的基础上给出了一个解决女性休产假期间与社会脱节的问题，为全文画上了一个圆满的句号。
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