一、题目
Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
二、解析
这是一道商业伦理大类观点型题目。题目的核心是探讨儿童广告的利弊。我认为儿童广告的好处是帮助家长了解孩子的需求在哪里可以解决，而危害也不言而喻，比如糖果广告、游戏广告等。禁止我不赞同，因为不能矫枉过正。我的立场是政府加强监管、规范有害儿童广告流入市场。解答这道题目对考生平时对生活的观察和思考以及英语语言表达积累有一定的要求。
三、一稿
1、首段
We are now living in a world of adverts, wherever we go and whenever it is we are bombarded by infinite amounts of ads. Among them, there are limitless commercials targeted at children. Some people strongly oppose them and argue that they are very poisonous and should be forbidden. In the following essay, I’d like to examine this position and then put forward my own opinion. （本段开门见山引出话题。)
2、主体#1段
The possible reasons behind the opposing voices are the following: advertisements aimed at kids can have negative impact on both of their physical and mental health. For instance, the appealing candy ads lure teens to eat too much sugar and suffer from tooth decay and obesity. In addition Video games commercials indirectly cause kids obssion in them and result in nearsightedness, lack of outdoor activities , poor health of our youngsters and neglectance (这里“疏忽”一词拼写有点不确定。晚点回来查有道订正。正式考试时我会规避这个没把握的词而改用比较口语化的词伙：perform poorly in their school tasks）of their school work. (本段讨论儿童广告的弊端。)
3、主体#2段
On the other hand, there is no doubt that children’s products or service publicity can exert upside influence on them when their parents are informed of this useful information about like the infants’ formula, most educational amusement park or museums for kids in the neighborhood or the best kindergarten or primary school the kids can be sent to. Hence the kids mom or dads can make the most crucial decisions of essential interests for their little cute darlings with the availability a nd access of these positive ads. (本段分析儿童广告的益处。书写心语：好作文是写出来的。不瞒您说，若水君在动笔撰写这篇文稿的时候完全没有想到可以写出这么多东西来。但是写着写着各种素材和思想就犹如神助一般从我的大脑中流淌出来啦。讲真，其实你也可以的！让我们一起加油吧！么么哒！）
4、尾段
To conclude, children are the future of our world, so the protection of children is never too critical. As far as I am concerned, nowadays TV, Internet or print commercials intended for teenagers have both strengthens and weaknesses. The government should take more effective measures to curb potential harmful ones and at the same time guarentee the healthy flow of helpful ads to benefit both kids and their family. (本段总结全文得出结论。）
四、早餐时间，范文比对和修改稿晚点奉献。敬请期待。
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