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雅思大作文日更017–信息分享有边界吗?( 2017年剑12Te

雅思大作文日更017–信息分享有边界吗?( 2017年剑12Te

作者: 若水Dewlight | 来源:发表于2018-08-14 06:57 被阅读3次

一、题目

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too much important and too valuable to be shared freely.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

二、解析

这是一道关于资讯自由分享利弊的观点型题目。题目要求对话题做双边讨论并给出自己的意见。我认为自由分享信息和好处是促进知识、思想和文化的交流和融合;坏处是知识贬值、科学技术人员得不到应有的回报、敏感技术危机商业或国家安全。我的立场是有限开放、有偿服务。

三、一稿

1、话题导入

One of the hottest news stories nowadays in mainland China is that the Trump Administration decides to take actions to limit the export of core micro chip technology to Chinese telecommunications company which disturbingly triggers the so-called Tarrif(这个词不太确定拼写是否完全正确。晚点修改时我会查一下有道。正式考试时我会用Trade War来替换。)War between China and the US. Here comes the issue: should we allow the free transmission of information between countries or regions? In the following, I’d like to discuss both the pro and con position and in the end to present my own opinion.

2、正方观点

Those who are in favor of information freedom believe that free and effortless flow of data and messages can contribute to the beneficial exchange of valuable knowledge, ideas and culture and hence promote the social and economical development of the whole world. Take the successful spread of ancient Chinese Tang Dynasty language, writing scripts, poems,  Buddhism and culture to Japan as an example. This magnificent cultural exchange between China and Japan greatly assists Japan to enrich its indigenous culture, meanwhile preserves many priceless tradition of ancient China and forms unique style of its own. Success stories like this are endless in our human history.

3、反方观点

Despite the pros cited above, completely open and uncensored flow of information, especially sensitive and crucial ones is detrimental to the interests of the scientific institutes, business world and the academic realms. As we know, there are no free meals in the world, and every discovery and invention comes with its tremendous  endeavors and price. If we just deliver the precious final findings without returns, the hardworking and honest scientists, engineers, entrepreneurs and academics would feel very depressed and even end up  in poverty and starve to death. On top of that, the unrestrained access of highly sensitive and essential information could result in the serious impairment of the business, industry and even national defense security. Therefore, those opponents opt for the selective availability of core scientific knowledge and technology to the outside world, which quite makes sense.

4、总结陈述

To conclude, it is obvious that there exist both benefits and drawbacks in information free flow. What we should do is to guarantee the fair and legitimate exchange of news, knowledge, beliefs and information, at the same time to ensure the protection and security of information of industrial or national significance to achieve sustainable development of the world.

四、早餐时间,修改稿及范文讲解稍后发布,敬请期待。

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