第一段
提出问题，引出话题
It is a matter of fact that we are now steping into a virtual world with the wide use of Internet.
随着网络的广泛使用，实际上我们正步入虚拟世界。
Then have you ever imaged what will happen when people prefer to live in the virtual world rarher than interact in the real life?
而你能想象人们宁愿生活在虚拟世界而不是在现实中交往将会发生什么呢？
1）实际上it is a matter of fact that
2)步入step into
3）虚拟世界a virtual world
4）随着互联网的广泛使用with the wide use of Internet
5)宁愿而不愿prefer to rather than do
6)交往v. interact
第二段
举出一些人和另一些人的看法，再说自己的观点
As for this issue, individual's opinions vary from person to person.
对此，人们的观点各有不同。
Some people believe that the virtual world will enrich our life with substaintial sources,
一些人认为虚拟世界充足的资源将丰富我们的生活。
while other people are worried about that spending more time in the virtual world will ruin our life.
而一些人也认为消耗太多时间在虚拟世界将会毁了我们的生活。
As for me , what I can imagine about living in the virtual world is that it will exert some negative impacts on people 's life.
对我而言，我能想到的虚拟世界将给人们的生活带来负面影响。
First of all, the virtual world has been changed the way that people communicate.
首先，虚拟世界已经改变了人们的交流方式。
Nearly all of us communicate with others via computers.
几乎所有的人们都用电脑交流。
As a result, we may gradually lose a significant ability of communication,
结果，我们逐渐丧失了重要的交际能力。
which should be mainly cultivated in the real world.
这种能力主要在现实生活中培养的。
In addition,the way that we communicate in the virtual world may isolate us and hinder the communication between us,
另外，在虚拟世界中我们的交流方式也许会孤立我们自己并且阻碍我们之间的交流。
which consequently makes us indifferent and cold-blooded.
这将是我们变冷漠及冷血。
1)对此as for the issue
2)因人而异very from person to person
3）一些人认为…而另一些人担心…some people believe that...,while other people are worried about that doing...
4)丰富我们的生活enrich our life
5)物质资源substantial sources
6)毁了我们的生活ruin our life
7)对我而言as for me
8) 产生，发挥v. exert
9)对…有负面影响negative impact on
10）对人们的人生活产生负面影响exert negative impact on people's life
11)首先first of all
12）人们的交流方式the way that people communicate
13）几乎所有的人nearly all of us
14）通过v. via
15)结果as a result of
16)渐渐地gradually
17)失去重要的能力lose a siginificant ability of
18)被培养v.be cultivated
19)另外in addition
20）孤立我们isolate us
21）阻碍交流hinter the communication
22）冷淡和冷血indifferent and cold-blooded
第三段
总结，在享受互联网的同时也别忘了现实生活中的人际交流
To some up ,when enjoying the virtual world,
总之，当我们在享受虚拟世界时，
we should still continue the interpersonal relationships and live up to everyday in the real world.
我们也应该真实世界中继续我们的人际交往，不辜负每一天。
1)总结to sum up
2)继续人际交往continue theinternational relationships
3)不辜负live up to
03:03不小心被外面的雨惊醒了。
既然睡不着就把3天没完成的残篇敲完吧。
昨天收到某朋友的小小表扬，除剩开心，再无其它。
以上分段短语都是不太好写出来的,掌握这些词组，可以用在写其他文章上。
文章拆过后，就要看看大体框架和从句句型了。
考试作文，无论四级还是六级，5-6篇就够了绝对够了。
问题是要对你复习的5篇文章掌握的程度有把握，句型掌握了吗，which，that，when会套句子吗？
thus，first of all，to sum up，in addition，however等短语会用多少？
frequently、gradually、consequently、easily、widely等会用多少？
还有一些套路，像as for my，as the issue，vary from person to person、double-adged sword 、make a difference、prefer to rather than do 、make impact on、some people believe that…other people are thinked doing that
亲们一定要注意质，掌握多少比看了多少重要的太多了。
总算结束了这篇稿，抽空怎么也准备了3天。
04:39完工。
此刻耳中传来罗志祥的《爱转角》。
比心，早安。
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