题目
Write a paragraph describing your lifestyle. How much stress do you experience? How is your social life? Do you like your life? Use different sentence lengths and different kinds of sentences to make your writing more interesting. Write 150-200 words.
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Your writing is well structured and easy to read. e.g.,"...Many of my friends and I have chosen the hard life since June 1989, crying for democracy and freedom in our motherland and fighting for human rights in China.." Your choice and use of vocabulary was very appropriate for this topic. e.g.,"....Our parents get old or have passed away, leaving us no opportunity to pay them back for their loves..."
Without divine knowledge, we know that our God awards us only one life apiece. Jesus Christ tells us he is the road, truth and life. To a well-fed intellect, one must make the difficult decision during his prime lifetime: whether to pick an easy way to enjoy worldly happiness or to choose a hard way to pursue the truth in Jesus Christ. Many of my friends and I have chosen the hard life since June 1989, crying for democracy and freedom in our motherland and fighting for human rights in China. We are mentally strong, prepared for various kinds of adversities such as pressed and depressed daily life, incarceration, accusation, imprisonment and even tortures. Now, many of us are experiencing mid-life crisis. Our parents get old or have passed away, leaving us no opportunity to pay them back for their loves. Kids have grown up in broken families without fatherly caring. We are jobless, but we have endless job to do. Always working overtime, we don’t have enough income for our shaking family. Do we have a failure life? Many people, including our family members think so. Do we regret? Nobody! Many of us now have baptized into Christian. We do believe in God, who are watching us and will reward us a splendid spiritual life and never-ending happiness.
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