翻译的李白诗一首

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  粒雪NEVE:偶然再次看到，琢磨了一个修改版：
  
  Living as we are just passersby,
  And like going home that we shall die;
  Isn't the world a tavern that we come and go so fast?
  Are you sad,my dear, for everything goes into dust?

  冉之:@NEVENEVER 我觉得自己那个翻译是逐句翻译的直译法，你的版本更像是现代诗版本。不知道感觉对否？
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  粒雪NEVE:Living, as passers-by,
  Like going home, that we will die;
  Under heaven, above earth
  Isn,t it just a tavern
  that we will say bye?
  Then,my dear, why should you cry?
• Finns:哇噢，赞，继续加油

  Finns: @冉之 😘

  冉之:@Fancy哒 谢谢鼓励～
• 鲜衣怒马是天涯:天地一逆旅说的是天地就像一座旅舍一样，生者来死者去，古往今来多少人为这件事悲痛不已啊。所以后面两句感觉不是很对

  冉之:@鲜衣怒马是天涯 嗯，谢谢指教！