一、题目
Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree?
二、解析
这是一道教育大类观点型题目。题目的重点是讨论传统书本教育在现代读屏时代是否还有意义。我的立场是书本的教育是深刻的改造心灵的使命，而屏幕的信息粗制滥造、鱼龙混杂对儿童弊大于利。
三、定稿
1、开头
Education is a noble cause which will shape the future of mankind. Younger generation used to acquire knowledge and wisdom of the predecessors from physical books, yet nowadays they could derive a considerable sum of information from the screens of the movie theater, home multi-media system, the laptop or smart phones. Some people argue that we should get rid of traditional textbooks because youngsters find them uninteresting, instead we ought encourage kids to learn from the new media. From my personal point of view this proposal is not quite desirable.（这里我开门见山改述题目并引出个人一边倒的反方立场。接下来我打算从两个方面来论证书本相对于影视网络信息的教育价值。一是书本是经过时间提炼和检验的人类知识的精华；而影视网络信息则有待世人评说。二是书本鼓励深度思考和融合，而视觉信息更多是是作用于人的情感和直觉，对于批判、独立和创新思维能力的发展有一定缺憾。）
2、主体#1段
To begin with, knowledge, methods, wisdom and beauty accumulated in the high quality pages of textbooks or monographs are ones which have weathered the test of time and reflect the essence of human cultural heritage. For instance, those classical books like Bacon’s On Study, Darwin’s Theory of Evolution or Halliday’s Systemic Functional Grammar, so on and so forth, constantly serve as a beacon to shed light on human enlightenment. Compared with traditional books, information or thoughts from the latest developed movies, TV programmes, video games or the Internet are just like fastfood or even some unhealthy junk snacks which are often felt very unreliable, inaccurate, miscellanous and even faulty. A recent tragedy of the death of a young college graduate who received a fatal therapy by a tip from a certain internet search engin in mainland China just shows how risky some internet messages might appear! Hence we had better count on the authorized official textbook to impart knowledge to our next generation rather than turn to the new channel of data.（本段使用举例与对比的方法论证第一个书本教育的优势。）
3、主体#2段
In addition, although some of the movie stories, video games or TV dramas do well in the aspects of combining images, sounds and emotions which impact on people’s instinct, heart and could easily resonate with the audiences, nevertheless the static feature of textbooks and other bestsellers in human history have the advantages of stimulate in-depth, independent, critical and creative thinking. With a book and a pen in hand, a reader is more likely to be involved in analyzing the previous causes and the posterior consequences of a typical noted incident in the distant past and gain multitudes of valuable experience and insights from them. The same also hold true for researching on findings, maxims or scientific laws from the science books. In other words, books works on people’s sense while visuals on people’s sensibility.（本段论证书本的第二个优势：引导学生深度思考。）
4、结尾
To sum up, in terms of cultivating the teenagers’ crucial overall cultural quality and critical logical thinking capacity so as to make sound judgement in their study, future work, life and meet the unkown challenges of foreseeable tomorrow, we should uphold the core position of classical widely recognized school textbooks and other traditional printed masterpieces although we can draw on the upsides of some modern novel media to raise students’ interests in their school subject and foster their ability to distinguish the right from the wrong.（本段我总结全文得出结论。）
四、原创感悟
一改以前中场休息的风格，本次我若水君的雅思大作文创作一气呵成。修改时整体上保持初稿原型，不过个别不太确定的小词做了查阅和确认。主体一段用了一个之前听到的新闻事件的例子，感觉挺得当的。这个亮点说明了平时素材积累的重要性。本篇范文字数会超过雅思大作文正式考试时一小时250字的限度，但因为这是平时练习，宜多不宜少。因为一般来说“加”比较难而“减”会相对容易很多。
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