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Hey, 你可曾听过容祖儿的小小

Hey, 你可曾听过容祖儿的小小

作者: enjune310 | 来源:发表于2019-02-11 21:54 被阅读12次

    HOW TO GET AN ENGLISH VERSION OF THE CHINESE SONG YOU LIKE AND MAKE IT SOUND NATURAL

    Hey, 你可曾听过容祖儿的小小

    The most important part to make a Chinese song singable and natural in English is to get each original beat in Chinese covered by the syllable in English. And rhyme at the end of the sentence may add aesthetic feeling to the lyrics.

    There must be a corresponding matchup between the lines to make the lyrics sound beautiful in a balanced way.

    Here are the steps applicable.

    1 Take each Chinese character as one syllable. Pause is deemed as syllable, and it could be one, or two or three syllables based on the time it takes. Figure out how many syllables there are.

    2 Match the syllable of English to that in Chinese. Make sure that the syllable quantity for both is the same.

    3 Make the English lyrics as neat and brief as possible with mainly noun, verb and prep. Leave out the subject if possible.

    4 Rhyme the last word of a line with that of another line close to it.


    Take the first two lines below for example.

    回忆像      个        说书的人

    memory      ,          storyteller

    8 syllables in total: 8 in Chinese, 7 in English+1 pause

    用充满                乡音的口吻

    Talks to me        like native speaker

    8 syllables in total: 8 in Chinese, 8 in English

    Rhyme in storyteller and speaker


    回忆像个说书的人

    Memory, storyteller

    用充满乡音的口吻

    Talks to me like native speaker

    跳过水坑 绕过小村

    Cross the puddle, round the village

    等相遇的缘分

    Await our first meet

    你用泥巴捏一座城

    Shape the mud into castle

    说将来要娶我进门

    Tell me that you'll marry me

    转多少身  过几次门

    How may times, how many rounds

    虚掷青春

    Never been mine

    小小的誓言 还不稳

    Infantile as the promises

    小小的泪水 还在撑

    Down with the shining tears

    稚嫩的唇  在说离分

    Immature lips for farewell

    小小的感动 雨纷纷

    Innocent touch in rains

    小小的别扭 惹人疼

    Moody mind with smile

    小小的人 还不会吻

    Young of age too young for kiss

    我的心里从此住了一个人

    You have been in my heart for a while

    曾经模样小小的我们

    Back in years since we were four or five

    那年你搬小小的板凳

    Little wooden stool in your hand

    为戏入迷我也一路跟

    With you in eyes we are side by side

    我在找那个故事里的人

    I've been in search for that man in tale

    你是不能缺少的部分

    You are the part that could never miss

    你在树下小小的打盹

    Down the tree you take a little nap

    小小的我 傻傻等

    Young and foolish I await

    当初学人说爱念剧本

    Read the script like a lover did

    缺牙的你发音却不准

    Not articulated without front teeth

    我在找那个故事里的人

    I've been in search for that man in tale

    你是不能缺少的部分

    You are the part that could never miss

    小小的手牵小小的人

    Little hand in hand yours and mine

    守着小小的永恒

    Keep the little wish in mind

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